if i cant
 

if i cant do it, it cant be done
if i cant win it, it cant be won
if i cant sing it, it cant be sung
im better than you dog im god's son

i cant do this, i dont no wut to do
i gotta kick this nigga ass,his does kongfu
im a special dog, im as hard as fuck
i cant be killed, im full of luck
yo dog its me, the best mc in history
im probally the best fing since micheal had billy g
yo im no wanabe im the real me
like my nigga slim shaddy & snoop doggy

if i cant do it, it cant be done
if i cant win it, it cant be won
if i cant sing it, it cant be sung
im better than you dog im god's son

yo im wn,yeah i escaped from the pen
to some im a god send,some im gone in v head
so wut do you fink, i no you be wishing me dead
ill never be caught,not by some stupid fed

if i cant do it, it cant be done
if i cant win it, it cant be won
if i cant sing it, it cant be sung
im better than you dog im god's son

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This was ok....sounds like something off 50 Cents CD lol.....i didnt really like it that much though but it was ok.....Try making your open mics more complex and not just one word rhymes....but just keep elevating and keep at it.