John Dough |vs| KayOhh
 

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Blind spits
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Check in

Didn't know you set it up, sure

time limit - 30 minz from check in,

I'm checkin in, agree to time limit???

Sure..don't matter to me..
I'll key it in 10 minutes ne ways

ten minutes, eh??? where is it at?...come on, its obviously already written

Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled
I clipped this bitches wings..so how can u be a flyweight?
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!
U heard me right..ehh..theres lots of gays in Britsh Colombia
Ya one of em..
Ya partners gave up fingering u..now they double thumb ya!
But ya elevating great kid..thats why u yelling out "save me!"
Cuz Kays going straight downward..even more than ya avy
3-0 rec? I'm impressed..but now you'll have one on tha left
Cuz if losses were God's grace..shit, I'm a leave ya ass blessed!
Peep what Kay goes by,cuz tha way I win this,it'll be tha same
Punches hit u so hard..have u saying "I'm Kay Ohh"

(Highlight sig for tha rhyming words)



good luck ;)

stfu..bitch I had other things to do..
My bad..sorry..it took 15 minutes..
I don't see ya verse any where..
hmm..its probably already written
...faggot..shut your mouth
No herb votes..explain or they'll be taken off

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Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;

From your, paps when you was younga, up the, ass with a cucumba,
I know its sick, ... but there's a, vast amount of wonda;

And, suspicion that you liked it, I mean I'm, thinkin u didnt fight it,
But enough with that, back to tha rap, and, flippin that vibe I kick;

Despite his past, Ima whip his ass, fuckin him up with lyrical, tae kwon doe,
Now its Impossible to identify him, even on tha file he's, named "John Doe";

I realize he's hit hard from, ma thesis, but ya better, believe this,
I'll mould this "Dough" inta cookie, crumble it up n jus eat, tha pieces;

I know he pre-writ it, but I wanna see it, mista "I'll key it in 10, minutes",
Your daddy started opennin ya up, but I as ya can see I jus, finished;


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There ya go, John Dough. Now lets see some explained votes.

Aight John Dough took this... Pretty nice verse


Intro:

"Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled"

^^ Decent punch

"I clipped this bitches wings..so how can u be a flyweight?
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!"

^^ Ok

"U heard me right..ehh..theres lots of gays in Britsh Colombia
Ya one of em..
Ya partners gave up fingering u..now they double thumb ya!"

^^ Ehhh ... ok ... u prolly meeant thumbIN ya

"But ya elevating great kid..thats why u yelling out "save me!"
Cuz Kays going straight downward..even more than ya avy

^^ Good play on the avy

"3-0 rec? I'm impressed..but now you'll have one on tha left
Cuz if losses were God's grace..shit, I'm a leave ya ass blessed!"

^^ Ok

"Peep what Kay goes by,cuz tha way I win this,it'll be tha same
Punches hit u so hard..have u saying "I'm Kay Ohh""

^^ Nice idea but sounds like shit


Not a bad verse... some good punches stood out ... 81/100


Kayohh:


"Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;"

^^ wack - you're not Snoop Dogg

"From your, paps when you was younga, up the, ass with a cucumba,
I know its sick, ... but there's a, vast amount of wonda;"

^^ Seriously comon, this was so wack

"And, suspicion that you liked it, I mean I'm, thinkin u didnt fight it,
But enough with that, back to tha rap, and, flippin that vibe I kick;"

^^ Is this all good be this wack or are u gonna throw a punch?

"Despite his past, Ima whip his ass, fuckin him up with lyrical, tae kwon doe,
Now its Impossible to identify him, even on tha file he's, named "John Doe";"

^^ Still weak but atleast you attempted a personal

"I realize he's hit hard from, ma thesis, but ya better, believe this,
I'll mould this "Dough" inta cookie, crumble it up n jus eat, tha pieces;"


^^ You tried a personal again but it was wack


"I know he pre-writ it, but I wanna see it, mista "I'll key it in 10, minutes",
Your daddy started opennin ya up, but I as ya can see I jus, finished;"

^^ And you topped it off wit another stupid ass line


Kayohh needs to visit Wackness EMergency Center and learn how to throw punches and use metapphors/ personals... EVERYTHING


Vote - John Dough

Uppin #1......
Kay Ohh's starting shit...lol
With people that could crush him..
And not think nothing of it...lol

swayer...jesus...
you didnt even need to up, we are already up, ur jus "uppin" ta sway votes...
whatever...this is bullshit

Yeah..I swayed alot right there ;)
Riiiiight...lol..trying to make excuses
Why he loss..thats # 2 for me

John Dough Was Cool I Guess....
Kay-ohh Was Wack...
Match To Johnny Cookie Dough :laugh2:

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Uppin this shizzy

pretty much merked....i vote for john dough
he came pretty good..other dude was really really wack..
i cant poll yet so explanation is wack...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114851

vote there