John Dough |vs| KayOhh
 

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No hate votes
1/2 hr,

This is my check in. Check in and agree

check....oh almost forgot...

You're Merked Again

???...right...you tryin ta fill up ur 50 characters? k...forgivin

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U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..


Yeah..thats twice now..
So spit ya little verse
And leave.. :rolleyes:

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Intro...
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Dough: A deer, a female deer, bitch,
Kay: A drop of golden sun, check it
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Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;

Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;

Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;

W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;

He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;


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Nice verse Johny boy, never battled nonamen00b, jus Kuniva, Proof n Chugs4Life, but they may as well be named "nonamen00b".

By tha way, the Irish dollar is a "Pound", not insultin anyone's intelligence, jus lettin yall know.

I gotsta go, Be on tomorrow, votes???

Arrite nice battle both yall. Here goes.

John lol nice stuff. Really liked ure wordplay, and ure punches came hard. Flow wasnt the best, but pretty good. This line was one i liked...

You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..

Funny shit man real good. Nice stuff.

Kayohh, arrite overall ure verse was weak, no effence. Acutally yea offence.

W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;

That was a weak excuse for a personla in my opinion. Ure flow asnt too good, and ure punches were pretty weak. As john said, He merked you.

If it aint clear enough........vote is for john. Mos def peace, niuce battle fo both.

"You're Merked Again"



John Doughs verse:

U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!

^^ I dont get it sorry, prolly just me

Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!

^^ Nice

Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself

^^ Ok personal ...

That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!

^^ ok punch

Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..

^^ Pretty good punch again


Overall: Nothin standout, but constistant punches and personals


Kayohhs verse:

"Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;"

^^ Aight

"Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;"

^^ Aight, kinda corny

"Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;"

^^ The only good part about this bar was my name in it

"W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;"

^^ If it's true then it's a decent personal but if it's not - WACK

"He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;"

^^ Nice multis but not a very good bar, ok


John Dough had more hardhitting consistant punches... Kayohh did much better this time but he's still a lil bitch that got merked.... twice

LoL..no that personal is not true..
...Its fake...And Intox..
Get on AIM

That is a hate vote, outlined in the rules as not to count.

mods should erase it. and im not makin excuses

That is not a hate vote... you got merked ... i broke my shit down

If this is a hate vote than so is yours against my battle wit .iLL.

If this vote doesn't count than neither should yours, you wack faggot

You never said in ur rules no hate votes, i checked. So, mine would count, even if it was a hate vote, which it wasn't. Why would you come to elevated jus to vote on this battle? Happened to stumble across it?

OK, this one was a much better battle...

best punch:

Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
^^LMFAO at this.... but fix ya structure, get rid of the commas

John - you should have took this one too, judgin by your skill level... but ya opener was misleading (acts like a punch, set up like a punch.... where's the punch?) and I didn't really feel much of the verse though I did like this:

"Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!"
but the rhyming was iffy...

other than that, nothin worthy of a win.... so....

Kay - obviously heated from your last battle, you took it out here and did fairly well. Your comma-based structure was so aggravating that I almost gave it to John... but I'll give this one to you for better punches, but clean up your structure. That is all.

vote - kay