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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm

I<--- new song....

peep and i'll peep urs...i'll peep urs anyways...

Intro sounds like your dying.

Your flow is way off, your bars are too long at points, your just spittin over a beat man, you not catchin a snare a hat or nuttin. No emotion, no delivery, etc.

elevate.

yeh, i thought i could juss bitch and not worry bout that and pull it off, but...lol
::dies::