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Hell's Vanguard
Check the sig he already visited me once, but he let me go spared me
so it's a lesson lived be he in all black, or white he truly has a form of one figure with scorched skin tar-like eyes and brows with torched limbs wit fur figure of such power, respect and warmth but merged wit fear, hate and sin nigga that touched cowards like athiests,snake,kane,judah,and pharaoh in tha beginning he's hell hitman check the bible verses are well writ on him the sole survivor of seven beast and he's hell and heaven unleased within him |
Strange Soda~
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wow this was a weird peice...im not even sure if it was good or bad to tell ya the truth never read anything like that...i must admit your original. Well you can improve but blah...i cant say much on this peice...hit mine up if ya can
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114704 |
This was weird lol.....you had good imagary i thought though.....vocab was pretty good in this.....flow seemed to be good....i dont really know what else to say so i will just end it there lol....keep at it.
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thankz for the feeback guys still uppin at cha
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this was very strange
psyco talk lol the rhyme scheme was off content was blah |
uppin read this folks
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