Take You To Exstacy
 

IT AINT LIKE THE GREEN THAT UD ROLL IN A DUTCH...
OR THE HPNOTIC & HENNESSEE THAT UD THROW IN YO CUP...
IT GOTTA CLEAN HIGH SENSE THATLE TIKKLE YA RIBS...
GOTCHA BALLS FEELIN GOOD... TRYNA TIKKLE YA KIDS...
ITS THE PILL... AND I AINT TALKIN BIRTH CONTOL...
IM TALKIN PUT THE LORD IN U... REIMBERSE YA SOUL...
THAT SHITLE HAVE YA TEETH GOIN... WHILE IT CURL YA TOES...
ESPECIALLY IF ITS THAT BOMB....
IM TALKIN BLUE SPADE....
IT HITS U IN 30 MINS... BUT YOU FEEL IT FOR 2 DAYS....
PLUS U FUCK FOR A LONG TIME... FOR THOSE IN NEED...
U BET ITS MY CHOICE OF DRUG...FASHO INDEED... :evilgrin:

This ok i guess here......take off the caps though it kinda hurts the eyes lol....Structure was alright in it for the most part, just try to even some of your lines out a little more though.....work on better content as well...try making it more complex also....but keep at it.