Sektion wants an enemy....
 

I started out unknown
now im buildin my step up
This Sektion is now known
So prepare to get f**ked up-

Yo,
Im sick of these pathetic rhymers
wasting my time on their bullsh*t one liners
its a crime every time they write
when it comes to open mic (i tell em)
dont even bother asking for my autograph
coz ill tear the paper outright
light it up then ill fight ur ass every night
despite your height of 6ft 4
youll get knocked to tha floor
and then one up for me
ur still begging for more
u should be dreading my raw attack
u'll be regretting my diss track
*spac attack* ur face will be smacked from my bat
ill retract my verbal damage
and turn over the page
so another shit MC
can feel the wrath of my rage-

<Sektion>

This is my first time so DONT go easy on me.

Start replying to other peoples Open Mics.

But this wasnt that good though.....you need to elevate a bit.....structure needs to be fixed up, try to make your lines a little longer and even them out a bit to help the flow out in your piece....try adding some multies as well....but keep at it.