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WORD~PERFECT 02-17-04 10:04 AM

who am i to we?
 
It’s the grand deception-allured to mans perception-
That order is found in governmental borders and perfection.
While the lawyers give money attention-
We ignore ghettos and polices’ mediocore protection-
It has nothing to do wit complection.
Now days there ‘s another form of racism…..
If your lower class- you kiss upper ass-
The only color running the country is the green of cash.
Sometimes the light at the end of the tunnel-
Is only found at the end of funnels.
Cause paradice has a price and ten dollars temporarely buys a better life.
And it ain’t right,,,,until it is…. nobodies righteous-
Death is rest cause being alive means a breath living lifeless.
the cost of surviving examples proof nothing is priceless.
YET Time is timeless……..
But mine’s limited if my watch and battery don’t work together-
So I use a sundile in hopes my life cycle lasts forever.
And if I die tomorrow have no sarrow …..
burry me face down to project-
That I don’t want to be remembered cause ill never look back or regret.
we claymation fake real interpretations……
born without remoarse or emotion-
So when they say do we have a heart?
Tell them to check the warranty and promotion.
see you look in the mirror and see an image so marvelous-
But my reflection sees emptiness with no purpose and worthless.
Nothing makes us distinct-we all hold a killer instinct-
They don’t live where we from and if they did projects would be presincts.
Im ….trying ….to ….make …..myself ….a …..better ….man-
But human cloning isn’t authorized so for now I survive with my human hands.
If my tears could speak they would describe how I lost my faith-
But till then they spell hate- tattooed to a withered face.
I wont be blind!!!!!!!!!!!!!for now I can see-
Im not you but am what you made me.

Kwizikz 02-17-04 10:10 AM

Gud drop...gud drop...Liked some of the imagery, wordplay and vocab...
Strong drop...8/10

Check my fatigue (the Author's enemy) drop in my sig

Decimal 02-17-04 10:14 AM

Nice piece dawg......Its dope

Nice Structure and Vocab....It Kept Me Entertained......8/10 is what i rate this piece wit

Dev 02-17-04 03:56 PM

i always like the way you structure your drops, shows that all bars dont need to be even.... as some people think...lol... as usual full of nice vocab... what more can i say.... up to your usual standard..... keep em coming twin....


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