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Bloomquist 02-17-04 10:30 AM

...The Death Of A True Friend...
 
The Death Of A True Friend

…Death is the greatest thing in this world…
…For when we die we can worry about nothing…
…Whom can I trust in this world, to make my feelings survive…
…The days are long, and the nights are cold…
…So hard living without you, how did I ever get mad at you in life? …
… I never deserved to be your friend…
…Yet you were there for me, even if it was you I hated…
…Forever I will never forget you…
…You showed me so much passion in this empty world…
…But I waited too long to thank you…
…For you were taken away from me too soon…
…It wasn’t fair…
…But you taught me that nothing is in life…
…You have to deal with it and get on with things…
…May your soul be blessed among the heavens? …
…You have showed me so much…
…You will never be forgotten…

HarleyQ 02-17-04 04:58 PM

That was a nice poem...I lost my 3 yr old brother this summer and this poem was very similar to what I wrote a while back...

*Harley*

lyricalchick86 02-17-04 06:01 PM

this is a good example of how u dont notice how much u love some1 til dey gon i really like yo poem keep dropin dem holla

Bloomquist 02-17-04 07:39 PM

appreciate the feedback. Uppin 1 on this

Sharp 02-17-04 08:58 PM

I like it. Im in process of losing ma nana, im gonna refer to this should the day arise. keep it up bruv.

Bloomquist 02-18-04 01:43 AM

Mos Def. Thx bro hope ya nana pulls through.

~holla if ya hear me


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