Only god can judge me [PLZ READ!!!!]
 

"Only God Can Judge Me"

Don't know me can't judge me don't know what type of shit i had to go through take you through a flash back and force you to do things people made me do.
Can't even find a real man always been forced into everything. Regent was a mistake disrespected n beaton my life was on the stake. I don't want to deal with this shit forget about living i feel like cutting my wrists now, don't even wanna listen.
All my life ive been living through hell so i know ill be going to heaven pop 1 pop 2 fuck it pop 7 no stopping me hope once its done all of u will see how much u dont know me and only god can judge me....

Feed back please

This was a good piece, needs work but for a first piece definitly decent. I think you should make it bigger give the reader more of a visual of situations you've been through. the emotion was good but could use some metaphores and such. keep writting and elavating i'll be looking at more from you. peace

Format is complicated but it's ok. Keep it up.