"4 GRANDMA"
This one is for my great-grandma I really admire her so this deep fom my heart.
I wanna take my grandma far away // where we can sit kick it and chill all day// Dip our feet in the pool while we sip lemonade//she ain't got no worries cause her paid // I'll keep her laced with all the finest of things //give her anything she wont from dogs to diamond rings// 73 years I aint seen half of what she seen//I love her so much cause grandma is a queen// Mildred Traylor superwoman indeed//so if it's within my reach i'll give her anything she need// She part the reason why I talk or I breathe//she's apart of who i am and i could never be naive// Ever since I was just a little kid she went out of her way for me to do the things she did// Just to add to that I could talk to her like a friend//I could tell her anything and i know she'd understand// If i could buy u this country i would and all the rest// The love I have for u no words can express// U the greatest around it's bout time I confessed//and if u wanted this planet i would start to invest// U also half the reason for my so far sucess//cause u told me do my best and never settle for less// If I knew every grandma in the world you'd still be the best//cause everything u do is just dif'rent from the rest// If it was up to me you'd have the finest fabrics on ya chest//somethin' classy wit finesse and u would never have to stress// You'd have anything u want whether a Benz or a Lex//the love I have for u you could neva eva guess// I'd write ya name in the stars just to impress// that phenomenal woman with such grace and such finesse// In other words if u don't know jus wati mean//u deserve anything cause you's a million dolla queen// If you was a buttafly you'd have themost beautiful wings//and if uwas a hummingbird what a song you would sing// If u wasa diamond you'd be the biggest bling bing//and if u was an outfit you'd be so fresh and so clean// I'd give you a bad house badder than you ever dreamed//backyard wit everything from carousel's to swings// I get u two dobie's just so can name 'em sheba and yakoo*//i'd get u the world cause no one's greater than you *names of her old dobie's and she always say she want 2 dogs to name yako and sheba What u think of that honestly i'm open for suggestions |
I felt this piece. Very emotional and heart warming. Had good wording and imagery. Flow was off sometimes but it picked up with content.
7.5/10 |
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