First Attempts...
 

Yo These are My First Two Attempts At Creating Beats From Scratch...
Give Me Feedback and Pointers... In my Opinion 2 is better than 1...
LaB BeatZ

Beat 1 - not bad for first beat, sounds kinda empty tho, like it needs something, sequence wise, you sound like you know where things go and everything, so keep up the good work

Beat 2 - yea your right this one is better than the first, your improving , this one feels less empty, could use a nice bassline and would be better. Kepp up the progress.

hit my new beat up please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115098

Hmmmm...;)

Beat 1
The Strings Are Kinda Irritating, But Its Aight...
The Drums Should Be A Little Louder, And Incorporate A Harder Snare...
The Shaker Is Nice...And So Is That JazzyRhodes Piano Thing...
Other Than That...The Beat Is Kinda...Bland...Needs A Little...

Beat 2
Ahhh...Its A Little Too Slow...Speed It Up A Little...Maybe, 100 BPM...
Once Again, Make The Drumline Louder, And Make The Snare More Hard...
Also, Add A Bassline...Better Than Your First, But Still A Little Empty...

You've Got Potential, And Once You Really Grasp This, You'll Do Fine...

Thank Ya Thank Ya....

I agree Beat 1 is missing something, but i got new sounds so i'll jazz it up..lol
And Beat 2 is slower... But i'll fix it:)

More feedback appriciated.