7 Seconds
 

lighting my life I breathe deep after moments
the price doesn't matter i'm addicted from loneliness
a perfect showmen..displaying none of the agony
unknown to feelings...because nothings a tragedy
draggin me outta stress,I couldn't think anything less
dependent on attention,i've learned this is the best
so I digest the clouds and look at a plain surface
only to notice my figure..figuring i'm worthless
doing it on purpose the attraction never doubts me
my reality counts free,but for seconds I oust me
I'm about to be moved,but I wont be moving
my breath is taken,but my legs aren't approving
removing my situation I expect everything to stick
because now that I love....it's making everyone else sick
so I pick 7 seconds...quickly knowing my makers met
my girl knows i love her but i'd die for a cigarette

This Was Great Nice Detail And Vocab.... I liked it Man Shuda been longer and it flowed nicely 9/10.

I havent seen one of these kinda spit in a minute. Where you dont really figure it out til the end. It was pretty ill dawg.

good shit more feedback?

that was really hot
it flowed nice and everything
keep postin