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Rap And Hiphop Isent All Punch Lines\ Its A Culture A Religion A Person Wit A Strong Mind\ Its A Revolution For The Streets\ A Release\ A Way 4 Cats Wit Beef To Make Peace\ A Way For People To Be Reached\ Wit Hiphop You Aint Gotta Smoke Weed To Let Mind Get Deep\rap Is The Struggle Aka The Husltle\ A Chance For People To Stong Arm Enemys And Show A Little Muscle\ A Chance For Have Nots To Get What They Dont Have And Let There Pockest Bubble\its What The Goverment Took From Us And Tried To Bury In The Rubble.

it was a nice lil flow for your first post but try expandin tha vocab. the topic was real tho keep rippin dude

that was hott 7/10
expand the vocab
and work on ur structure
keep postin