ThIs Is nO JoKe FaMzZ
 

stay gutta, i stomp out u think the beef is over, please joker,
ill run up on ya wit heat and roast ya/ make u meet ja hova
i see ya chochaa i aint blind/so if i see u slippin lil nigga its playtime/
i stay grindin/if i need the money my nigga i will deal/i seen more yayo
than jail cells/yall stay frail and i make the streetz rock/cuz my jointz is hotta den weedspotz/my jewleries real dawg/ the girlies holla/and dat plastic
on ya neck cost 30 dollars/u aint workin nada, so u dyin to snitch to get money,cuz no one wanna higher a bitch/if im eyein batch, homie baggin em/slowly mackin em/da chickens love the cock man itz only natural/
u walk in wit a chick thinkin u pinp harder/ but she leave for me cuz im a bit sharper/strapped wit a 9 and a clip partna/and on the feet iller dunks than vince carter/my shits harder the lyrics is killa/alwayz got diamonds in my hand dun u'd think i was jigga --Da NtRuDa-- u aint even see it comin.... :shoot: :huh:

holla at me mann...tell me wut u think.....battle callzz--1-

it wasn't that good
shit didn't really rhyme
and no vocab
keep workin on it though

dat wuz aight but it didnt really make sense 2 me,but keep workin on it let me know if ya down 4 a battle holla atcha boi Buc

Check dis out imma spit somthin 4 yall

I done pulled choppaz rims dont stoppaz my music like wood shop damn i done chopped/ ya i rock da dam boat its ya boi buc and imma hit ya in tha throat/ when ya hoes se me all yall do is stare diamonds in my watch i done gave u tha dam light /i done did tha matrix goin in slow motion its ya boi buc and i got dat pimp potion /look at my car rims spinnen crazy its ya boi buc and i aint have no damn babys/ up in my car screens fallen relentles its ya boi buc in a candy expediton grippen wood grain wit damn gucci seat/ i know u like my style but dont go boppin me

holla atcha ya boi and tell me wat u think ~1~

buc
it didnt rhyme in some places
u need to work on vocab
keep droppin

A yo will a peer wats da deal did u read my flow tell me how u think i want 2 battle hit me up

Wackness

yo famzz u niggaz iz reall weak...i can rip yall wit da quikness--battlez--

^^î would own you lets battle on it droppin 25 lines

Well dis was one of thos peeps who finks rap is bout streez and guns...man u can rap bout anyfin but dont rap bout streez and guns coz every 1 does dat and its all da same cheep tlk..It was ok...flow was nice but the topic of GUNS STREEZ AND MONEY bores every1 to death...You gota b crule to b kind man..i anit bein tight but u wont improve if i dont ell you wot i fink....keep tryin tho man....pz

I dont woan free post but please can som1 drop some feedback on my open mic coz no1 on ere will feedback...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116915

Well it was ight, considering the fact that it had little to NO ryhme scheme and was rather simple in nature talking about what most ppl talk about these days. But I've seen worse....much worse

I thought they wernt that good both of them

U CaN't HoLd Me
 

:help: :laugh2:

LeTs Go, SeT iT uP