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demolish 02-21-04 01:53 AM

deadly lyricist
 
i'm a take out your eyes and swallow them so you can see that i'm ill,
emcees betta believe that i kill.
i'm as untouchable as eminem and dre,
bring your crew and i'll blast ten in them today,
best emcee to date,
rappaz i disinflate. i strangle rappaz till they eyes fall out,
ain't stoppin till wormz get inside and they start to crawl out.
i'm the devil in disguise,
ya'll neva seen an emcee this wise.
that can send fiends to the sky.
i take out emcee's teeth like if they just took a trip to the dentist,
you can neva dent this,
beat rappaz relentless,
dope is what the scent is.
usin ruthless metaphors,
leave rappaz toothless while some i pounded on till they head get sore.
i'm packed wit weapons like a soldier at war,
just came out so which means i' m raw,
shrp lyriccs cut you like saw.
usin incrdible syllables,
i'm sick, i'm also the illest yo,
if my enemy ain't deceased then i;m a kill his bro.

Willa 02-21-04 03:48 PM

gay as fuck
no vocab
keep droppin though

Ambition 02-21-04 06:59 PM

will a peer" dawg I'd like to see some of your shit. Cause I think you talk to damn much

Illizit 02-21-04 08:38 PM

Deadly lyricist, Illizit say like your sentences//
and of course like thoughs metaphores//

"i take out emcee's teeth like if they just took a trip to the dentist,
you can neva dent this,
beat rappaz relentless,
dope is what the scent is."

These lines got me smillin
untill next time keep it grindin.

demolish 02-22-04 02:56 PM

ambition and illizit thanks for your props.
 
ambition your dope as fuck, and illizit i haven't read some of your shit yet but im a try to. :thefinger that goes to "will a peer" damn dawg you talk too much shit

skam 02-22-04 03:10 PM

im new too
 
noone can define my skills
im like a cross between a bottle of vodka n 3 bottles o pills...

yo.. my minds hazin
im pagein' agein' caucasions to see if they find my shit amazin.
its a maze in here, im lost in ma mind
an i cant get out, but fuck it, i dont mind.
im kinda like the things ya find unda ya dads bed -
the tied up men wi bags ova their damn head
dead like the day they were born, i mean alive
i thrive on the thoughts of havin 2 wives.

ma heads cavin
the mothafucka jus caved in n collapsed up all wi ma brain in
an now im ravin, so watch ya back -
i got HIV n im hooked on smack
n i got a dirty needle, headin 4 ya arm
because im evil, causin ya'll harm
I NEED TO BE KILLED!!!

SKAM Big up... phew, epha, pose, omega one, jist, chap, gents, task... keep it goin boys...

demolish 02-22-04 07:49 PM

thats cool could've used better vocab yho. still dope. keep droppin

skam 02-23-04 01:04 PM

some of its a bit sketchy i know. ' i thrive...' that line was shit. so is ' i dont mind...'

demolish 03-05-04 08:01 PM

gimme some feed back

demolish 03-08-04 06:05 PM

feedback plz

SPuLâ„¢ 03-16-04 09:23 AM

That was some good shit, man. That dentist line was a good one. :thumbup: Good use of metaphors too. Keep it up!

PimpinMike 03-16-04 04:32 PM

Man that sucked demolish check it
:shoot:

Man Fuck Profecy, Your ass wotn even battle me//
And believe me, Your scared, Your ass is wack, and you trying to decieve me//
So they callin you the fuckin greatest//
Well bitch ill battle any motherfucker, Im the Fuckin bravest//
Your ass needs to leave and go back to listenin to sublime//
That shit aint as hardcore as my motherfuckin rhymes//
You run like no bitch man you aint got shit to look out for//
Look out for me bitch so when you do see me you can shout whore//
I cant even hear your shit cause its to much of a fuckin bore//
bitch if you dont battle me//
ima fuckin declare war//

demolish 03-17-04 07:50 PM

ayo pimpinmike trust me dawg you dont wanna step to this.
this just muthafuckin freestyle, but if ya really want beef call me out on bitch slapped you fuckin pussy


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