one of da very best
 

slap rappers, turn them to singers,
kill emcees wit the touch of a finger.
slap you secondly,
so you can look at me correctly,
don't mess wit this hardcore mc,
i'll make you think your name is leslie.
make you get on your knees and buck led on your face,
youll drop dead in your place.
to kill me mcs aint strong enough,
to see your children i aint gonna let you live long enough.
i cause an avalanche,
before you battle me call an ambulance,
face it you fake mcs don't stand a chance.
this is a metaphoricle, oracle,
that can leave a four inch hole. in your brain,
have u robbed from cheese to your chain.
some say i rhyme like a glock,
cuz i bust on the spot,
and i make a hole in your knot.
my fingers are sore i guess i'm just achin to cock,
get you close range to strengthen my shot.

who want beef?

:shoot: :shoot:

Im kinda in a pissed off mood, and i didnt like your lyrics so imma take my anger out on u o.k?


Demolish, it seems you're about to be demolished,
Astonished, wiped out and lyrically abolished,
To Say Your Verse Was good would just mean im not being honest,
You asked who wanted beef, and im saying yes,
Just To Shut Your Fucking Mouth Up, Not Even To Impress,
My lyrics are lyrics that you could never test,
So Dont bother writing back, just give your fingers a rest,
Between Me And You There Aint No Contest,
Coz you have to be the worst rapper that ive ever heard,
Gangsta Loving Nerd, Probably Tryna Sound Obserd,
Embarrasing your self mentally word for word,
You're Verbs Aren't Absurd, So Just Sit There And Listen,
To How Im About To Bury You With My Views Without A Rhythm.

HAAHAHAHHH. Im Just So Pissed Off - Thats Made Me Feel Better Now lol.

the flow
 

Both those flows were tight, to bad this aint the place for battling.

-have u robbed from cheese to your chain-
That shit was hilarious, some good stuff man, overall your spit was tyte, keep up the good work, I particularly like the end of your flow, it just work alot better, you can improve on the beginning.

Razer- the beginning of your flow was hot, i really liked that part, you can so finish off better than that though, If you were gonna clown him, throw in some personals. Other than that, good job.

some feedback plz

Tight Shit. I Liked It. It Works For Me. I Want To Hear Your Shit When Your Pissed.


S.v. The Tyrant

thanks for the feed back. look at my other threads.