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lilkdogg1988 V P*Nok
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I giv these newb a word of warning… never test the ill
First Ur illiterate son, Secondly, U don’t have the skill You’ll get run out of the site to the point U’ll be “exhumed” N cos I ‘m posting ill, don’t run away jus cos U doomed U From the former capital…But capital punishment is all U’ll gain And Ur Claim 2 fame..”Kwiz beat me, another loss to My name!” I’ve laid down my battle style…The Truth..U can’t come close So delete Ur verse…Fuck it…honestly mate, DO NOT POST! Listen kid…If you need style…Ur comin to the wrong place …U can never be as weak as U and still last the pace! |
Hold up yo i didn't agree but it's straight! How long is it till we reply!
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ok home boy i'll holla back check it fo real! i got you homeboy!
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Mate! ok first of Yo shit is wack! You must be white cuz no black would say that! That ain't rap all that is is talk! You be like yo he killed me! GREAT SCOTT! Ain't that right wit my phat rhyme! Don't show me ya watch cuz bitch, i fuckin take time! But no yeah i'm stupid, i'm big headed! Would you please stop talkin bout how my dickhead is! Oh yeah by the way I post shit ill! On my way 15 and i'm making a kill! On yo punk ass yes yo punk ass! You just mad cuz i put this rap shit on Blast, but when you see me walk down a block! Please keep ya eyes off my cock!
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ight good battle uppin for votes! C'mon Y'all holla at me!
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Yo still uppin for votes I need this fo real y'all holla back!
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im giving this to pedro nok
lilkdog that werent no keystyle |
very week battle....
pedro....punches came very week......flow wasnt realy there....structure was nice....wordplay was ok.......personals were week....overall......4/10 like dogg .....came week with da punches....flow was there......structure was nice......wordplay was basic.....personals were also week....overall..5/10... keep it up both of you...aaaaiiggghhttt!!!!!! v/like dogg HIT DIS WID A HONEST VOTE PLZ: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=115323&page=2 |
verse by pedro
I giv these newb a word of warning… never test the ill First Ur illiterate son, Secondly, U don’t have the skill You’ll get run out of the site to the point U’ll be “exhumed” N cos I ‘m posting ill, don’t run away jus cos U doomed U From the former capital…But capital punishment is all U’ll gain And Ur Claim 2 fame..”Kwiz beat me, another loss to My name!” I’ve laid down my battle style…The Truth..U can’t come close So delete Ur verse…Fuck it…honestly mate, DO NOT POST! Listen kid…If you need style…Ur comin to the wrong place …U can never be as weak as U and still last the pace! good verse here good pouches great metas and werdplay...but your finisher stunk practice makes perfect so keep doin it Mate! ok first of Yo shit is wack! You must be white cuz no black would say that! That ain't rap all that is is talk! You be like yo he killed me! GREAT SCOTT! Ain't that right wit my phat rhyme! Don't show me ya watch cuz bitch, i fuckin take time! But no yeah i'm stupid, i'm big headed! Would you please stop talkin bout how my dickhead is! Oh yeah by the way I post shit ill! On my way 15 and i'm making a kill! On yo punk ass yes yo punk ass! You just mad cuz i put this rap shit on Blast, but when you see me walk down a block! Please keep ya eyes off my cock! very very weak you need much elevating but you did have some good metas vote pedro for a much stronger verse outta the two hit my battle up with an honest vote peace |
Yo Still uppin for votes Yo! i'm waiting for a win or something!
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you from the phill spiting like that, give it up the other cat got this |
Yo i need to get some votes c'mon holla back! It's real!
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vote goes to pedro, last dude verse was wack as hell
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ight ok i need expos to get votes now! Holla at ya boy!
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