d.j em sce VS. Mike12Ikeda freestyle battle
 

yo, it´s here no biting, dick riding, or pre-written freestyles. 10-20 lines. you spit first

i got to spit first aight give me a min

I need to go at 550, so i think its fair if you have until 35-40 aiight and ill spit in 10-15 min.

aight here it is let the best man win????


Even in yo sleep you couldn’t full fill yo dreams,
You spit shit dat be absurdly obscene,
I shatter schemes,
and have you fellin bluer than jeans
yo pitiful , so I’ll leave ya critical,
yo rymes are nastier than fat hoes skinny dipin in a swimming pool,
my recommendation is that you get a new style,
cuz yo ass is crazier than dem girls gone wild,
then I’ll get all in you like da bullets from my shotttie
Then I spread like a desiese all throughout yo body,
Now the afta maf of our confrontation,
Equals a no mans land filled wit devastation,
and Even if you had bifocals you still couldn’t see me clear,
so don’t make me flip the script like my name was William Shakespeare,
and if you was Picasso you still couldn’t picture this,
cuz I spit this shit that crowns me the best lyricist ,
I got so much heat 4 sholy I will ignite ya,
And to finish you off I’ll verbally snipe ya,




this is coo but not my best work, i think it will do tho
remember freestyle.....

yo i gotta go, i will write this prolly in an hour. but i swear, ill use 15 min. to freestyle. take my word, if you think im a liar check my other posts. sorry about that

im bout ta go in lil like 5mins then i'll get back tommorow

aight 15 mins i'll take you up on that..............................

check check check in to this battle....freestyle of ff the top

I will fulfill my dreams cause I get no sleep//simply ma work ethic is a method to ma success//I'm like NAS the way that I'm "blessed" (God's son) wit respect//and my rhymes are "nastier than fat hoes", you can't touch this//Just ask MC hammer, you like him your rhymes out-of-style like your grandma//You from Sacramento, well I'll steal the crown from this "King"//I'm the scariest thing you've seen ever since the purple and gold (Lakers)//And leave you frozen on the spot like weather's cold//and knock you like Webber's injury//Look what you did me, Imo have to screw up your chemistry//I'mo leave you scared like when I taunt ya bitch//and drop "bombs" on you from "downtown" like Peja Stojakov-ic(h)

we both had about even amount of time to spit. nice rhymes though they were hot. im not too sure wit mine. peace..

guess i cant change it now but it suppose to be "weather's too cold" sorry just makes a big difference in the flow

you guys both did good over all for some newbs

it was coo for sayin you gana write it in 15 min but sayin you gata go and youl post in a hour thats gay

yo im giving this to dj em sce
sorry mike12 ikeda but you just took 2 long to drop

Break'N It Down..
 

D.J. Dienasty: 5/10
Even in yo sleep you couldn’t full fill yo dreams,
You spit shit dat be absurdly obscene,
I shatter schemes,
and have you fellin bluer than jeans
yo pitiful , so I’ll leave ya critical,
yo rymes are nastier than fat hoes skinny dipin in a swimming pool,
my recommendation is that you get a new style,
cuz yo ass is crazier than dem girls gone wild,
then I’ll get all in you like da bullets from my shotttie
Then I spread like a desiese all throughout yo body,
Now the afta maf of our confrontation,
Equals a no mans land filled wit devastation,
and Even if you had bifocals you still couldn’t see me clear,
so don’t make me flip the script like my name was William Shakespeare,
and if you was Picasso you still couldn’t picture this,
cuz I spit this shit that crowns me the best lyricist ,
I got so much heat 4 sholy I will ignite ya,
And to finish you off I’ll verbally snipe ya,

Mike12Ikeda: Biter...
I will fulfill my dreams cause I get no sleep//simply ma work ethic is a method to ma success//I'm like NAS the way that I'm "blessed" (God's son) wit respect//and my rhymes are "nastier than fat hoes", you can't touch this//Just ask MC hammer, you like him your rhymes out-of-style like your grandma//You from Sacramento, well I'll steal the crown from this "King"//I'm the scariest thing you've seen ever since the purple and gold (Lakers)//And leave you frozen on the spot like weather's cold//and knock you like Webber's injury//Look what you did me, Imo have to screw up your chemistry//I'mo leave you scared like when I taunt ya bitch//and drop "bombs" on you from "downtown" like Peja Stojakov-ic(h)

I am giving this battle to D.J. Dienasty because Mike pretty much bite off of D.J.s verse....that's bullshit. If your gonna freestlye make up your own shit..don't use someone elses verse.

Vote= D.J.

~R~