in my eyes
 

in my eyes ya cant hide from somethin like a nine trigga/nigga ya got 3 wishes n im bout to slit yo troat/wit some broken dishes/leavin ya like a crack head/jus twichin wit yo head detached stapled to da
glass/kid while i skip class you go out searchin fo some male ass to tap like a phone line ya wanna listen in/on
my conversation ya faget i know you on da otherside
masterbatin/im takin all my shots n knockin ya off yo thug spot cause i found out ya fake/jus found out dis bitch is a snake/look at his ways he bout to get tazed/he amazed dat im hittin him dis way/bout to jus fuck up his fade/excuse me while i pop dis bitch wit a
mofia hit ~1~ :shoot:

And No Structure Ya Rhyes Use Metas Wordplay And Vocab
Played!!!!!!!!!!

not that good. keep droppin. you need punchlines,or better yet some metaphores.try 2 increase your vocab too.overall it ok.

ight so it's like dat i thought dis was an OPEN MIC ROOM but it's all good
jus rememeber i have 7 other forums i have to keep up wit so if i drop
somthin n dont come back to it for a minute thats why ~1~

tight flow, but a little to gangsta rap.