lil rip
 

you think you know crazy well you dont now me// i'll take a knife to a gun fight and put them all to sleep// look into my eyes and see no fear// i make mama's cry knees shake when i come nere// I'm lil rip so you better learn the name// got a heart of ice body intice wit flames// i'm badda and madda than any one can be// so try crack before you come tring me// cause i'm not the one to be mess wit// cause if you step you ass will get delt quick// i'm the type of nigga that will smoke and ride with a pump in my trunk 45 by my side// do or die// coming out busting slug // if you dont know i live the life of a thug// they call me lil rip because i rip track like i'll rip your heart of your back then snap like a twig// like ludacris// tell'n niggas move bitch// out my way// before i spray that ak//

rofl way to bite that "i bring a knife to a gun fight" off 36 Mafia, but since ur a homo newb, I wont report it...
fag

i wasn't tring to bite idon't even like 36

everyone in rap has said that line...........

one love......

and its from the movie THE UNTOUCHABLES.......

Eh...This Was Ok.Some Played Concepts.Some Weak Lines.You Need To Work On Your Structure,Organization,And Your Flow Was Off Too.Using Metaphors And Having A Bigger Vocab Helps Out Too

2/10

work on ur vocab and dont write in paragraph form