Bloody Hands
 

My hands are bloody after this act of hate
my hands are bloody when i think i found my soul mate
my hands are bloody maybe thats just my fate
my hands are bloody and its getting real late
my hands are bloody even at this rate
my hands are bloody when opening this gate
im sick of my hands being bloody why do i have to wait?
why do i have to wait for the world to turn
why do i have to wait for this boy to learn
why do i have to wait for this place to burn
i guess maybe some people just dont learn

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7.9/10
 

Creative & Impressive :thumbup:

It makes you think "WHY THIS, WHY THAT?" as if your in so much need for tha truth. Great concept, perfect flow, thoughtful, and encouragin'! :thumbup:

From "MY HANDS ARE BLOODY" to "WHY DO I HAVE TO WAIT" is very creative.

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