Makem understand
 

yo, i flow for the power of the people;
captivating minds and anticapting like a sequel.
get checked in da jaw bigger dan a seagals/
you know how da deal rolls in this life sold;
to the devil, a.k.a uncle sam and i'm da rebel/
starting a revolution wit a lot of a bass and treble/
never shall we rest until freedom is expressed/
fast food making us feel distressed torn in between da chest/
don't mess wit a man's quest, beeep, dis is a test/
know matter wat the endevour holds, i'm here givin yall cushion like dr sholls/
who knows more lines dan da riddler dropping mad rymes/
front page l.a times i'm still in my prime like dinasours roming da earth/
for billions of years i'm out for the next rebirth of the chosen one/
yes dat be me, golden son of an imigrant that unfolds the hell bent/
so far, i feel like i'm heaven sent, dats it, time to pay da rent/

This was alright man....you seem to be getting better, elevating a bit man...had some decent metas in there....structure could be fixed up a bit, some of your lines were stretched out towards the end which threw the flow off a bit but it was ok...keep at it.