Where men become gods
 

my culture been stalked by these spanish vultures/
poachers hunting us down like big game in this aztec town/
brown and proud, i'll suck da styles like a drout/
leaving you without a breath and bringin mouth to mouth lyrical inject/
been swaped like little bitty insects by these renissance pricks/
time to make dis time tick and tock; electrically vibrating shocks/
past and present reconnect with a funky dialect that i create /
mean green is my state for yall who feel me to relate/
mexican up to date means you know the steez in these day to day basis/
its a crisis in my peoples surroundings; time to make a bounty/
between los angeles county, i feel the ancestors crying /
who will testifying when all da crimes were left hidden inside a bee hive/
honey dipped jive i'm out bring da dead back to life/

I liked the topic idea man....seemed like a good idea to do something on....the content in this was alright...probably could have hit the topic better than what you did but it was still a nice read overall...keep at it.

i felt the flow man....i like ur style just add more content but keep doing ur shit...

peep mine too and tell me wut u think

i agree wid crez da topic was nice but kinda spoilt by the rhyme...vocab was ok but there was no flow and no mutipus....if u wont respect man u guna av to work for it...keep it up...