- Probably My Best Yet -
 

I attack then erase the memory of every enemy,
Come with aerial attacks, snap lyrical banks heavily,
I fight with words that are too obserd for an average rapper,
Bitch slapper, Rap Attacker, Grown Slacker, Word Jacker,
Known hacker, of other rappers punch lines,
Eat Mc's for lunch time, im that one dime,
That could kill a whole crew with just one line,
Defeat Lyricists until i see the sun shine,
My Minds in two ways, two different sections,
One gives me lyrics, and the other gives irrections,
I spit at my reflection, because i see my brother,
Lazy Assed Mother, and my two timing lover,
One Bit after another, my life is swept underground,
Im fighting every memory, until im outta pounds,
I Drink until im pissed, stuck to my right wrist,
Awnser every question every day with my white fist.

Yo some of this shit comes straight from the heart. Hope You Peeps Feelin This.

PE@CE

this was very good.....very good flow and structure.....wordplay was nice to....8/10
keep dropin den....
pz

drop some feed back on my open mic,heres da lnk: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115862

Any more feedback?

that was nice. actually it was dope.
i like your word play
keep it up


check some of my shit out

^^Thanx^^

Anymore feedback b4 i spit the next open mike?

Whats Upper?
 

I DIG YOUR SHIT. FOR WHAT I'VE SEEN, YOUR HARD. IF YOUR INTERESTED IN JOINING A CREW, P.M. ME. I'LL TELL YOU WHATS UP FROM THERE. CHECK MY WORK AND HOLLA AT YA BOY.

.........SUPERVILLAIN OF THE CRHYME SINDICATE

that was actually decenyt givivng the fact that most cats on here spit crap
good shit though keep it up try to make that shit longer and you would be well on your way

"don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens
Advocatus Diaboli- Join or die motha fuckers

^^Thanx man^^. Ill look out for your om shit now.

PE@CE

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...148#post1206148
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116388

Those are my first 2. :thumbup:

yo dis shit was wacc,..nah im playin it was hot nice linez
good thinkin with da rhymin cuz alotof people dont use webster(vocab)
keep dis shit going son

nice.i like it.

^^Thanx^^

Pe@ce