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dagreatest V Juss_Blaze
now its dagreatest vs Juss_Blaze/
aint no competition i'ma tear his ass/ after this first verse its simple as that/ on the floor i'll lay you ass flat/ i'm lyrically blessed on the mic/ i dont use bullets/ i kill people with rhymes/ dont even think about it/ i'll slaughter you before you put up a fight/ by the time you come up with something/ half way decent as mine/ sorry you just ran outta time/ you cant rap to save your life/ dont try to hide it/ this might be the last thing you do/ cos you messing wit someone thats criminal minded/ like nas said "I'll embrace ya with nepalm/ "legs, chest, hair face gone"/ use you as the prime example/ why you shouldnt mess wit dagreatest da true don/ you feeling the heat/ all the way from London/ you should rename you name to name-biter/ call yourself Juss_Blaze/ you aint him from rocafella/ you get paid for being a cocksucka |
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can someone tell me how my verse was, i just need to know if i'm improving or not
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c'mon Juss_Blaze, u called me out, do your verse, i'm uppin for votes with or without your verse
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oh for god sakes, someone atleast post something in here please
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excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/
i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/ U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/ my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/ go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/ your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/ you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/ you? win this battle? maybe a next life/ you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/ my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/ your career was good, but now you just blew it/ i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/ u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/ im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/ then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/ im in a rap university with a full scholarship/ you aint on my level, you in community colleges/ so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/ i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/ |
i made a mistake. read this instead
excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/ i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/ U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/ my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/ go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/ your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/ you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/ you? win this battle? maybe a next life/ you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/ my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/ your career was good, but now you just blew it/ i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/ u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/ i spit hot shit, like great balls of fire/ im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/ then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/ im in a rap university with a full scholarship/ you aint on my level, you in community colleges/ so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/ i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/ |
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yea juss i think gott this B/c he had harder punch but dagreatest verse was god but not hard enough but juss blaze was try'n to hard wit them wack punches i'm off that
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damn that was sick. dagreatest you were straight. juss blaze was better.
he came hard . nice metas and everything. vote-juss blaze |
This battle wans't too good.....dagreatest....I think that you should extend your bars..........and also work on your flow............because your verse looked elementary.......1.5/10
Juss Blaze......your verse wasn't great....but it was better................juss work on your flow also............and the rest will follow............4/10 |
juss blaze, go this
because he killed dagreatest with his punclines meta and simi-juss blaze vocab-juss blaze flow- juss blaze multi's -juss blaze juss blaze was just better on this one, dagreatest, you need to wrk on getting better punchlines |
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