...peeps game
 

yo .... peeps game...
...I dont do well in skool, but im far from a dummy-
Even at my lowest, im still stakin money-
You know slim nigga, whos pockets stay chunky-
Plus i know that recipe for makin butta extra lumpy-
I toak good cheeda, it stay stank and funky-
Some from the past wanted me, to cut em in on a deal-
Dats sumtin i dont do, get at me with bud or dolla bills-
Like my nigga 300 say, Shits REAL!-
N dats me, realer then the tatt on my arm-
CHI CITY nigga wasnt raised on no farm-
i noticed that, some niggas going thru a crisis
poppin tags on sale, while i pop 'em with original prices
dont think its shit talkin, i got that license
i call to the chi will have you alone and lifeless
i flow should be sumthin dats studied in science
cuz how i spit will have a nigga thinkin in silence

This was ok....didnt really like it though....not really into the "gangster" pieces....but it was ok for what it was I guess....you should try writing about something different than those kinds of pieces....But it was alright...had some decent lines in there....keep at it.