LK63 VS DavioSenBoo
 

spit
so we can get started
10-20 lines

K, heres my stuff:

Time 2 unleash a barrage of 63 typsa venom at u
Fake as a mirage, u gonna lose due to ineptitude
Drown u in poisonous spit, have ur bitch ass screamin
U happy as hell when I lie n say it was ya man's semen
U were Lappin it up, I clap ma vocab n ya totally fucked
Only battlin u do is over which of k2's dick u suck
Ma intellect enslaves while u await ur emanicpation
Nothin changed 4 u, cos u only indulge in masturbation!
Sentences soaked in Arsenic make u succumb n surrender
Wrap ur feeble rhymes up n mark em "return to sender"
Ur 3rd world verses are obviously still "developing"
My stanza's leave crumbs n dust in place of ya skeleton
20 year old loser, gettin demolished by a new user
My shit fucks u over so bad it'll make ur anus EVEN looser!
Cudn't bring hotness if u had a pet dragon that blows fire
Within 2 seconds of bein posted ur shit'll b old n expired
Makin that open call, heralded the starta ur downfall
Shit leave u chokin fall 2 the floor, ur keyboard n all
Typin's like a ganga hooligans so heres an M, it'll sound fine
Cos u jus bin Left Kicked 63 Million times...by Davio's rhymes

Heres 2 a gud battle mate :thumbup:

Here it is……….

U talking bout fags like u got a Hidden Agenda\\ Would u like 2 elaborate, or just straight Surrender// Do u see a sign saying ‘’Its O.K to be Gay’’ No\\ So Please Fuck Off, u can do it the Gay Way// My rhymes r ill\\ got u scarred by more then ur Medical Bill\\ I lyrically kill// And if u can’t Grasp It,\\ I’ll come tear holes in ur Casket// Like pregnant belly’s, u bout to undergo Changes\\ U couldn’t backup ur mouth, if u got Metal Braces// Embrace This\\ Ur rhymes r messed up like, maximum Security Bank Lasers// In this game I’m holding the Ace’s\\ U running a bluff, and I would love to raise This// Call me LK a.k.a the Emcee Killing Machine\\ Ur the only one not breathing at my Crime Scene// U think ur style is Hot, well I’m a Firefighter\\ U couldn’t have an outstanding line, if u wrote it with a Highlighter\\ Ur rhymes r filled and punches made of plastic, like a lucky Packet\\ Ur struggling with punches, like ur stuck in a Straight Jacket\\U think ur so Wonderful\\ buddy ur fucking Horrible\\ do the smart thing, Quit now cuz this pain will be Unbearable, and the killing Unforgettable\\ My punches r cutting Edge, that’s why u Spilling ur Guts\\ Ur rhymes r empty, like Do It Yourself ‘Water Buckets’//Ur throwing weak punches, and writing lames on ur Page// By the time u get One punch in, id probably have died of old Age// These punches hard like a Mallet, ur losing, Cuz u lack a lot of Talent\\ My shit kills fast, u think u got what it takes, sorry but U Haven’t// In this battle, vote’s r like Pussy, u’ll Neva get Any\\ Buddy, I’m Sorry, but u don’t stand a chance Against Me//

I guess I had a lot 2 say.....huh, ..I just wrote it, sorry it took so long, just havnt been at home much

Lets get votes

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yo hello can we get some votes in here^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote

lk63, awful opener and the whole first few lines were real bad, and your structures real off take a look at dat boo doo's ,but thats all he had u on. some nice punches nice meta's best one and that do it your self water buckest one,U couldn’t have an outstanding line, if u wrote it with a Highlighter// jus dont use (//) and get better openers cuz the rest pretty good.
senboo, decent spit too , but no flow wit that, get some multies and try to go to a beat not jus straight lines seems too white. try stayin completely away from any gay lines people dont like 'em on here. rechecke your finisher, didnt get the punch but it had a good beat to it, try keepin doin all your lines like that. but other cats punches beat ya, them thangs were nifty haha, those and flows win battles jus so u knows.

vote-lk63

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=110266

yo get an honest vote back at me agians ricannelly kid. preciate it

yo hello can we get some votes in here^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote

yo hello can we get some votes in here^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote
jeez how hard is it to get votes

yo hello can we get some votes in here^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote

Dave got it for strcutre flow and orignatliyt wtf LK so played out

Dave=6/10
Lk=4/10

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lk63 started bad but recovered well getting better...
davio was a lil less complex

lk63-6.8
davio-6-6

lk63 started off pretty bad but started to pick it up through out the verse. your verse was kind hard to read, not all that bad though. your punches n wordplay just got boo's verse. average battle...

vote lk63

dav
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 6/10

ik
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

v/ Ik63

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