free style 1
 

yo bitch i got ur motherfucking bitch took
it aint no thang i will leave ur ass hanging on a hook
don't bat talk me
don't be mad at me
cause before u know it i'm gonna be on tv
bitch get smart and learn the game
i'll take out my knife and disect ur brain

Vocab.
ya just didnt do any nice words, too many fillers.

Some of ya rhymes didnt make sense

"bitch get smart and learn the game
i'll take out my knife and disect ur brain"

what that shit have to do with eachother?


It just sounded like you were forcing rhymes together, ya need a lil work.