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Da Vinci 03-08-04 08:11 PM

Da Vinci VS L.e.b
 
10-15 lines
No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
3 straight or first to 5
Due by 9:00pm Tuesday night
Don't care who spits first, but I won't have time to go till tommorow, so to speed it up, you can if you want.

L.E.B. 03-09-04 12:32 AM

So this rap battle is against a chump named vinchee
i must be dreaming, somebody please pinch me
this battle be over in the blink of an eye
ill give u so much pain, u'll want to die
and beg for me to kill u and rid u of the pain
but im like a serial killer, mentally insane.
I wont stop, till ur on the floor bleeding,
with your chest wide open, and rats feeding-
on ur intestine, the outcome predestine
the pain unbearable, nothing comparable
to this little ass whipping addressed to you
mr. da vinci better think of what u should do
your dumb ass should of stayed out of rapping
if u had kept on painting u woulda dodged a slapping.
so ur times up, here's a friendly goodbye
wait a second, didnt u just fucking die?

:shoot:

Da Vinci 03-10-04 02:36 AM

Sorry I'll post by tommorow, I've busy with school lately.

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:15 PM

Dear Diary,

Today I had to battle this boy named Da Vinci//
I'm really quite confused, I thought I’d win, but he's beat'n me easily//
His mettas, were better, and I've never seen a vocab with such complexity//
He moved around my punches, oh so effortlessly//
Its almost as if he had a map to my entire strategy//

Maybe Tim tipped him off, Tim is just pissed off, he needs me to swallow but I can’t help but spit//
Da Vinci even painted my name (L.E.B) Lyrically Everybody’s Bitch //
Now everyone's callin me this! Tim tells me “it won't stick,” and “just shut up and stay up on this dick”//
All-and-all today was shit, even my mom told me that I was an accident//

She said she didn’t plan on having me as a baby//
But two transvestites rapped her back in the eighties//
And I know this all may sound crazy//
I went to a psychic she told me to kill myself cause I have no future//
After this battle today I'ma take her advice and listen to her//
Dear Diary, I regret to inform you this will be my last entry//
I just don't see the point not more, after battle'n Da Vinci//

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:16 PM

Sincerly, Yours

L.E.B

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Alright there it is, now we just votes. Sorry for taken so long man, I'm just in mid-terms this week.

Da Vinci 03-10-04 08:20 PM

What the hell??? why did it spread mine on to two posts?? Anyways, nice drop L.E.B

L.E.B. 03-10-04 08:53 PM

very nice style on ur rap, lets hope ppl actually vote.........

Da Vinci 03-11-04 04:04 PM

Come on yall, we need some votes on this one, either way!!

Da Vinci 03-11-04 05:55 PM

Alright yall, I just voted on about 10 or 11 battles, so can we get some votes here.

Afterword 03-12-04 12:31 AM

yo yall are right about the lack of voting aroun this bitch
niggaz iz sleepin on this one too
on da real i have low expectations for most of these battles, but this one was hot
yall both came correct, with the vocab, rhyme scheme, and word play

but i side with da vinci for killin him with the diary entry, fresh and creative
L.E.B. was hangin in there but i wasnt satisfied with his ending

Da Vinci 03-13-04 10:08 AM

We need some votes on this one yall, either way.

Restricted 03-13-04 11:14 AM

Alright..

I think Da Vinci Took This One Because of His Style With His Flow...I Like That...Something New....

You Pimp Come Check Out I.L.L. in Crew Forums...Just Try Out...

To L.E.B.....You Did A Good Job Just His Stlye Was Crazy Man..

Vote: Da Vinci

~R~

Da Vinci 03-13-04 10:01 PM

Alright cool, we still need more votes. Come on yall,

Da Vinci 03-14-04 08:41 PM

Hey we need some votes on this one, come on yall

Da Vinci 03-15-04 06:06 PM

Alright, I just voted on a bunch, I'm gona bring this to the front of the front lines one more time and maybe these people will check it out.


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