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SUPERVILLAIN 03-09-04 06:05 AM

S.v. The Unbreakable
 
I Twist Caps Back Like Stallone In "over The Top"
Hopin's Not Gonna Keep Ya Focused
When Your Folks Have Been Shot,
Both Of My Glocks Stalk
And Pop Twats That Talk Raw,
I Get Props From Cops That Watched On
Then Walk On...
Shit, Just Another Day For The S.v.
Dont Test Me,
Unless Im Resting In Bed Sheets,
Tired, Dead Asleep
Because You Cant Learn Your Lesson When Im Ready
Bet Me!
Beheadin' Undead Mc's Is Something I Do Steady,
Daily, On The Regularly...
Fact Of The Matter Is, Im Badder Than Marsh Mathers Is,
*"pacifist, But If Im Pissed, I'll Pass A Fist"
That Shatters Fragile Grins
And Show All Combatants The Tragic Skits
From This Savage Kid...
Im Simply Tricky, Sickly,
Grimey, Slimey And Gritty,
Get Behind Me If Your Ridin' With Me
If Deny? Step Aside, Dont Let Pride Connive Ya Thinkin'
You Can Try To Ride Against Me
Like Two Tires Passin' By
On A Bike Like A White Ten Speed,
So Just Hide,
Or Try To Cry
To Grow My Sympathy,
'cuz I, The Violent Tyrant
Reign With Fire
And Delete Thy Enemies



.............supervillain Of The Crhyme Sindicate
*(quote From My Boy "rkane"...M.L.)

SUPERVILLAIN 03-09-04 09:52 PM

Damn! Does A Motherfucker Really Have To Just Talk Shit To Get Any Feedback. Whats Happening Here? How Fucking Weak..........

..............supervillain The Tyrant

demolish 03-10-04 12:40 AM

that was some dope shit. you should post more often .

SUPERVILLAIN 03-10-04 02:16 AM

Thank You, Much Love Playboy. Im Just Waiting For Someone To Call Me Out For A Battle. Im Ready To Shit On Cats.

Also, Whats Up With Supreme? Is Chekmate Still Workin' On His Shit?

............supervillain The Tyrant

Impendance 03-10-04 03:00 AM

Fuck thats some good shit, how long did it take you?

I'd offer to abttle but Im scared and have a lack of posts :).

I like your gritty style etc, but I dont like Jay-Z More of a Nas fan myself.

Peace.

SUPERVILLAIN 03-10-04 03:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Impendance
Fuck thats some good shit, how long did it take you?

I'd offer to abttle but Im scared and have a lack of posts :).

I like your gritty style etc, but I dont like Jay-Z More of a Nas fan myself.

Peace.



THANK YOU FOR THE POSITIVE CRITICISM MY FRIEND. HONESTLY, I HAD THAT VERSE DONE IN LESS THAN 20 MINUTES. I LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING YOUR STUFF. INSTANT MESSAGE ME WITH YOUR WORK AND I'LL LET YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK. PLUS, I HAVE ALOT OF LOVE FOR NAS. HE'S A GREAT LYRICIST, BUT IM MORE OF A HOVA MAN MYSELF. ONE.

.........SUPERVILLAIN OF THE CRHYME SINDICATE

SUPERVILLAIN 03-26-04 05:33 PM

Does Anyone Have Any More Feedback For Me? I'd Like To Hear What You Guys Think About This Verse And/or My Others.

Supervillain Of The Crhyme Sindicate

Gambino 03-26-04 06:31 PM

another bomb dropping verse man....

thats my nigga.....


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