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SnypeR-vs-enygma
8-15 bars..................
no biting................ no recycling........... post by 9 o'clock............ you post first............. |
Checkin in................................................ .........
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Alright...............I guess thats cool.................checkin in
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Ayo, check this shit out.........it just might make ya laugh...........
Spittin first and gettin hyper, got this dude shittin in diapers/ Could have been a blind spit, but I guess you gotta see to be a snyper/ Tray-Six? get back to basics before I find replacements/ You're tasteless, I do this shit for kicks but not Assiccs/ As far as your flow goes, you're rhymin worse than homos/ People would sleep on your shit even if you were rhymin wit No Doze/ Plus my rhymes are cancerous, You need to call an ambulance/ This dude typed up come shit, read mine, and then he cancelled it/ You're not even slightly like me, If i'm lyin may lightning strike me/ Even your lyrics are unmentionable, they should call you tightie whitie/ I'll leave ya snorklin, You're in deep water like the porpoises/ I'll straight up murder your ass and force your kids into an orphanage/ I'm offin this coward, Lyrics leavin him lost for hours/ And the only time he's spittin shit is when he's tossin salads/ Come wit it |
I pity myself...dont need much for this.......
A quick keystyle................... Enygma.. I make liers out of Enimies who claim their "Bars-Are-Sick"/ Cause like "Actors-on-Strike" you shouldnt want any "Part-In-This"/1 Im "Shining-but-Felt" "Residing-in-Hell" spitting "Nouns-At-Vets"/ if Enygma "hung Saddam Hussein on his wall" he still couldn't "Mount-A-Threat"/2 Your always "Revert-And-Slow" cause ur "Verses-Flow" with the same consistency of a "pregnant-bitch" on "Birth-Control"/ Enygma couldn't win this battle if he "drove my Royce backwards" and "Reversed-The-Rolls"/3 My "Lines-Whisper" "Devine-Scriptures" from a "Minister's-Ghost"../ that "Intertwine-Mixtures" of "Mind-Pictures" and "Sinister-Quotes"/4 I "Suppose-you'd-hope" I didn't "Remember-to-Show" "Cause-Know"../ Enygma...your "Fucked-If-I-Drop" like a "Prisoners-Soap"/5 |
may the voting began...................................
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Enygma.....that snyper, diaper line is play.............you need to work on makin your verse more complex....you have nice structure, and ok flow...one of the better verses I've read..........4.5/10
Snyper....your verse was one of the nicest I've read on here....you were clearly on another level........... Quote:
that was sick...............7.5/10 |
enygma, Ya verse was a bit played... There was really nothing that stood out, The line about flowing like homos was retarded... Work on ya metas and punches and personals and you'll get better
SnypeR, Hott verse man. Definantly agreeing with TOoN About best on the site i've seen. 'I "Suppose-you'd-hope" I didn't "Remember-to-Show" "Cause-Know"../ Enygma...your "Fucked-If-I-Drop" like a "Prisoners-Soap"/5' ^ Fav Line.... Vote SnypeR |
thanx for the luv................uppin........................
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Snyper, there should be no question.. man i kno it sounds gay but fuck i wish i could spit like you. damn your verse was hot. punches, flow, everything was better.
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thanx man..............that's kool dawg....................................
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When I read enygma's verse I knew the next cat was gonna have to come nice with it. And then dude comes ten times better than nice. Definite clear win for snyper, no question about it. I dug enygma's rhyme scheme, concepts and flow, and his verse would have won most newb battles I've seen around here. He was just outclassed this time. Hope to see more from both you guys.
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thanx dawg...................................uppin...... ...
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yo snyper killed this one, enygma had some nice shit, but like someone else said this was just one like a flyweight against a heavyweight, nice verse, that shit about saddam was tight, i gotta give this one snyper,
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