Lyrical MC Vs ...Adept...
 

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i will drop first to speed fings up.

Adept dropin but they hit as if they mirrored herb,
fellin' no intestity from his punches like he neva delevered word,
his wackness on da mic shows hes mastered no mic credabilty,
Adept sylbols lack complexity,coz wack flow though him like electricity,
Adept you cant gain credit from rhymes so slack they bring hostility,
dont need sixth sence to realsie his over sung ablity,
He despatches da punch but ricershades,
hes losin' more mic cred wid each rhyme needin bandaid,
but he's 1-0 battle pointless wen he cant compete wid me,
his flow week and choke on da mic so i get rid of thee,

When You Post A Verse, People Be Like "Oh No Shit-Again"..You Couldnt Understand My Verse If I Had It-Explained..Hearing You Gives Me A Massive-Migraine..Live-Insane, And Its Like Your Donating Your Head Cuz Your Known To Give-Brains !!//

I Digest-Guys, Test-If-You-Cry, Your Skill Level Is Small Like Preteen Girls Breast-Size..Rest-Your-Tries To Defeat Me..Your Hopes Should Be Like Broke Man In A Suit Store You Could Only Get At Best-A-Tie !!//

You Land-Crap..MC Knows Hes Gonna Loose, Thats Why He Already Planned-A-Rematch..Bland-Free-Raps, Kill Ya Style, Left MC Like Jealous Lighter Salesmen, Saying This Cant-Be-A-Match !!//

You Wear Blouses-Dude..Cant Afford Weed..So MC Gets Douced-With-Fuel ..Your Spouse-Drools, And Like Naughty Childern You Never Seem To Obey The House-Rules !!//

You Attend-ed-Defeat..MC On Da Net All The Time MC Gets A New Boyfriend-Every-Week..Defend-My-Peak, You Won 10 Times?? Well Like Secruity Guards Chasing Nude Runners, Im A End-Your-Streak !!//

Blah...Rushed It!!

this was a weak atempt to beat lyrical m.c...adept you was lrite but need more skill so next time use betta vocab and btta meta4s...you lacked punches..

lyrical mc..good punches good all in all lines..see you keep it about rymin and about lyrics..you dont get off subject like killen somebody with a gun or fuckin hoes..thats wat i like bout you..

may the best man win

His Shit Was Basicly The Same Complexity As Mine, Fuckin D/R!
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That's true. In fact I think Adept had greater complexity. But it was a real mixed bag. It looked like he was really strugglin' to make some of that wordplay work and it would'a been better to chop some of it out, tighten it all up a bit. A tighter verse with similar content would have gotten my vote. But too much stuff just comes off as not really working. So vote = Lyrical MC even though he didn't throw any hard punches.

you both sucked, has this site lost the illness?

cause in this battle their was none,,


STEP YOUR FUCKIN GAME UP

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lyrical mc..you had an aiight flow and your structure was definetly there. U had sum nice punches nd personals. you had some good multis as well. Try nd woprk on ur wordplay...keep it up

D.J Mcsee...you too had an aiight flow nd structure but your punches really didnt hit that hard enough in me opinion. U didnt have any multis or wordplay..

vote lyrical mc

breakdown of lyrical mc's verse:

flow: overall through the whole verse it was alright at the start it was alittle shaky when you added those big words the sylables didn't match up but anyway 7/10

punches: nothing too direct the best line, "Adept sylbols lack complexity,coz wack flow though him like electricity," hurt but not enough to win i don't think 6/10

volcab: you tried to include a good variety of words but it seemed almost like you were just adding random words to make it look good cause it did hurt the flow in spots overall though 6/10

overall: 19/30 alright verse

breakdown of adept's verse:

flow:i don't know your bars were huge it really looks like maybe you were pushing that limit alittle much with the length of them but you included an alright amount of multis to help the flow through i'd give it 6/10

punches: this is where you shined the best you had just overall more punches and the qaulity of them was stronger my fav was, "Your Skill Level Is Small Like Preteen Girls Breast-Size.." it made me laugh you won the battle here 8/10

volcab: nothing amazing but solid all the way threw you didn't hurt the flow but didn't over simplifly it either good work 7/10

overall: 21/30

vote--pretty close battle were lyrical mc had some stronger mechanics adept just ran away with the punches i'd have to give my vote to adept though

lyrical your good, but you really should work on your wordplay but you both sounded like you were reachin. Adept came wit some clever lines

Rappin Master I Think That Was Considered D/R For The Simple Fact That DJ MC Was Not even In The Battle and you Said He Had Aiight Flow You Will Be Reported!