halo-b vs code-187
 

10-12 lines
u have in till tommorow at 7:30
to spit u spit first
no dick riding
and no biting
and be honest for votes :thumbup: :spit: :thumbup: :shoot: :evilgrin:

yo, i murk this dud easly like i was drinken some code-red/
this bitch think he done won this battle guess he's way over his head/
i think this bitch is about to no show and he really won two battle/
if i win this battle he would be like no i just fittle -fattle/
i take you back when your flows were really timeless/{code vs timeless}
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=112892
after i get done i rip out your heart and leave you spinless/
see need to stop right here and just had over you soul/
you be like damn i lost 4 time i done went over my goal/
see you need to carry around and emergency kit/
i think the best battle was when u was a newb u vs dUrAsTiK/
http://community.rapbattles.com/sea...d=16630&page=10

look at the seventh line it is supost to be ,see u

see were he won't no show like he does i will give u untill 6:00 tomorrow
pm or he no-shows

I TAKE DA MICKEY LIKE MOUSE, PUT MY DICK IN UR SPOUSE
LEAVE U SHOOK AND STRICKEN TO MUMMY AND DADDYS HOUSE

HALOBS-ABOUT AS LOW AS A LEPRECORN CAN-CROUCH
IM LORD OF THIS RING,.. U CAN SAY ARROGORN'S ABOUT ( a character from the film)

WOW,.... THIS PUNK PROVED HE CAN REALLY BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<<<sarcastic)
IM GUESSING U WROTE THAT SHIT URSELF SO WHAT THE FUCK IS "fittle fattle"

TAKE THE FIRST TWO LETERS FROM UR NAME THATS THE WORD THAT BEST DESCRIBES U (ha- AS IN HA-HA...........HES A JOKE)
HIDE BOO................. IMA TREET U LIKE MY BITCH

>>I JUST SWALLOED UR PRIDE AND ATE UR VERSE WHOLE
SO GET IT RIGHT COZ KILLING FAKES IS MY ONLY "GOAL" (LOOK AT HIS 9TH LINE)

OK LETS GET SOME VOTES

explain ur votes PROPALLY and leave ur links and ill get back atcha with honest votes

aight this was a coo battle but imma have to give thhis one to halob he had betta structure and good punches coo meta4s but he should have done betta 6/10

187 you was coo but you should have done betta ...yo structure was not really that good it was kinda hard to read.. you had to explain your self to much but all in all 5/10

can you vote on some of mine but vote for the best person

may the best man win

uppin 1x vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

good battle- im think that halob took this one cos of the better flow and good personals 5/10

code - ya first part sounded like a nursery rhyme- no offence try and work on ya flow

vote- halob

honest vote on this plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116230

yall need to start voting vote vote vote vote vote

yo halob got this one heres y..................

Halob: you had way better structure first of all and it was easier to read....
also im kinda fellin how you used his old battles against..............
you had some koo punches as well but you need to work a lil more on your
vocab but over all it was coo.........

code-187: Way to simple for me man you also did a lil bit of feedin but is coo....
you need to work more on ur vocab and metas and a lil more on your
punches.............

my vote= Halob

dat was a good battle

flow-both of yall flows was nice
punches-halob had some good n funny ass punches 187 yours was good but it kinda got borin wen i got father down
personal-n/a
yall both can elevate a little bit but my vote goes to halob because of his punches

I voted Halob, his had better structure and was easuier to read. The caps REALLY threw me off, and the (<<<sarcastic) was bad also, you should be able to communicate that.


see you need to carry around and emergency kit/
i think the best battle was when u was a newb u vs dUrAsTiK/

I liked that line, also your punches were good.
Vote on my thread guys.