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SnypeR-vz-mcCracken**Real Thread**
aight.........the other thread wasn't set up right so I'mma post the verses in here.................
wait.. just 16 lines first to 5 5-0 ko |
mcCraken's VERSE!!!!!!
aright yo i flow nonstop like a motherfucken radio you rhyme like a scratched cd, so for you its not ~ok to flow~ you only get pussy if you pay or rape ho cuz you're SLOW AND STUPID... like using a ~rake in snow~ I chew you like a dog.... who knew id be raw? ME! and thats all that matters when youre new to this all oh you'd want to brawl? i take a power tool to your jaw its like tryouts bitch, but dont assume you'll be called ayo everytime i drop shit its hott bitch, like the tropics bet lets NOT get off the topic, your ~not shit~ you got that? im crazier than that CAT wit the ~top hat~ like an anarexic your NOT PHAT, damn right i ~drop hot raps~!! and its amazingly crazy to see this lady act masculine raw prevails over wack, so its ~basically my task to win~ now pass the jin, and i still slice you fast and quick your like an ~ass! get kicked~ or just an EVRLASTING DICK!! ****YOUR VERSE'LL BE KINDA SHAKY SO IMA STEADY THE RIDE, LIKE BIGGIE YOUR ~READY TO DIE~ WHEN YOUR BODY AND MY ~MACHETTI'S COLLIDE~!!!! whaaaaat |
MY VERSE
aight...........check it i dont need-gatz,belive my text will simply leave you with your knees-capped/ i kno your "asian", so you mean it litteral when you say you "eat-cats"/<~~~~haha when im ragin ill flip, if you cash all the chin-checks im givin you, id be making you rich/ plus i'm a child molestor in battles . . . just look at how I'm raping this kid/ bitches these days, so mcCRACKEN hold heat? dawg ill leave you and your crew frozen/ spittin like you think you a “gift”, fuck it bitch ill “rip you open”/ ill give you a sneak-view, blast through like your fake ass is see-thru/ like battling the "invisible" man, when it comes to skills, “i don't see you”/ i break spines, he wouldnt match rymes with me if he made mines/ cause mcCRACKEN’s like a game of "four square" with all those played lines/ he wont do "big things" if he had a "dick pump", confessing-his-mind-state/ the time awaits, mcCRACKEN never seen who he's messing with, like a contestant-on-blind-date/ your super soaker making-me-wet, doesent mean that you can "spray-with-the-best"/ you'll pay-for-your-threats, like "dolphins", I got you "running-away-from-the-nets"/-(hope you get it) |
aight.........vote now.................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Umm MC your verse was one of the better one's I have seen on here.....I didn't understand some of your punches though....like
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^^^^Punchline didn't make sense like that................. Like this Quote:
^^^pretty sick man...................nice multies................verse......7.5/10 Snyper...........your verse was constant fire............... Quote:
^^^^that was a crazy opener........didn't think that you could keep you verse that strong throughout............................then I read........... Quote:
^^^^Crazy nice man................8.5/10 MC...your verse started out weak, but ended strong...........while SnypeR's verse was strong throughout............ |
thanx for the breakdown TOoN..........................
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McCracken-> Had a nice flow, had a few good hits. Not much impressed though by his wordplay or most of his lines. It was hard, but not that hard. kinda catch my drift here?
Snyper-> Your verse was non-stop beat the hell outta him. lol. I liked your flow and you had some ill-ass punches. You had nice wordplay and metas. VOTE-> Snyper. McCracken, keep writing. You have the skillz you just gotta put it all together. |
Yeah SnypeR........represent.......................
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uhhhh sounds li,em theres a little dick sucking going on...but its straight whatver
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aight i shouldnt have to even write this cuz its so obvious that sniper got him all the way...but sniper had betta everythin good punches good meta4s good everything..
i like your style of rappin its crazy but clean at the same time...8/10 mc you was aight for a lil thin you was gettin boring.....you should have neva even battled him...but you was alrite you could have done betta i hope...ypou alot of work on your battles....4/10 may the bets man win |
I don't d.r............and you know that Snyper got you in this.....I explained my vote clearly............so don't even try that...........
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his shit was ill its just when 2 crew members both praise him like a mother fucker and give me a 4 outta 10.. whoa donno bout that
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