authentic vs. d-meth
 

regular rules, ill post my shit tomarrow.

ayt checkin in, ima have ma shit up by tonight if i get time or tomorrow

alright i got work so ill post tonight around like 10pm eastern.

lol im alte on dis shit, but i forgot about it, o well heres goes ..


ayt authentic, u faggot,

acceptin ma challenge only ends in death, ima start witcha neck,
snap dat shit back so hard, u won't have any time ta regret,
ya nerve ending will burst, a 21-year-old virgin dies first,
an for ma next verse, i tell ya stealin other people's lyrics is plagarism,
dat's the only way ta win against me, unless u find a straight-man killing mechanism,
yur pacin up and down the room, thinkin of a stupid rhyme ta diss me with,
but your brain's too damaged from me ta think of any good shit,
flippin thru the dictionary, seeing all those big words, wonderin which to choose from,
see you we're a loser from day-1, u shudda beat yo dad up for defective cum,
cuz now his child isa freak, a half-it with 8 arms, 3 legs, and no penis, there's balls, and vagina in between-it,
you should jus go get a job at the circus, you can be the "thing" wit the "whiskers" or the octupus-man,
in your current position, you're not goin many places, so face it, jus quit rappin and put in diary yur "I made ya",
go trade pokemon cards wit lil kids, an if you're feelin horny, show em yur dick, they'll play wit it because yur girl never did,
so shit, go shoot up a library, and if you didn't get caught for rapin the kid, you're definately goin dis time bitch,
you feel right at home, rapist-homosexuals and psychotic people, which kick yo ass for lookin like a creep yo,
so nighty night and sleep tight, hold on ta your bed covers real hard, cuz in the mornin ull be needin all dat muscularity in yur fore-arm.

peace

man fuck d-meth, its the young hugh heff, words eat u alive till theres nothin left
u talk too gay, u must be gay, cuz u aint got really nuthin else to say
ur mom is great, and this aint fake, d-meth is our little mistake
my wordplay is.... not a joke, try my flow you'll probaly choke, my punchline are water and brotha u cant float
ur such a little bitch, it probaly makes u sick, if u tried to kick a rhyme you'd probaly slip
u think ur straight ur blind, u think ur girls are so damn fine, but all they ever want is it from behind
and its a bitch, some drag queens look real as shit, but it should have tipped u off when she said her name was rick
get in my way ill slap u sick
u wanna talk gay, ill feed u dick
but i do know one thing though
u can not stop my flow
so just jump on the cock and proceed to blow

authentic gits ma vote cuz he came wit betta punchlines and structure and personal betta....vote lyrical vs YoungStar http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116325
VOTE:AUTHENTIC

lol ayt, uppin! drop a vote in here, drop yur links an ill vote in yur shit

peace

need more votes.

vote!!!!!!!!!!

d-meth came strongeracceptin ma challenge only ends in death, ima start witcha neck,
snap dat shit back so hard, u won't have any time ta regret,
ya nerve ending will burst, a 21-year-old virgin dies first,
an for ma next verse, i tell ya stealin other people's lyrics is plagarism,
dat's the only way ta win against me, unless u find a straight-man killing mechanism,
yur pacin up and down the room, thinkin of a stupid rhyme ta diss me with,
but your brain's too damaged from me ta think of any good shit,
flippin thru the dictionary, seeing all those big words, wonderin which to choose from,
see you we're a loser from day-1, u shudda beat yo dad up for defective cum,
cuz now his child isa freak, a half-it with 8 arms, 3 legs, and no penis, there's balls, and vagina in between-it,
you should jus go get a job at the circus, you can be the "thing" wit the "whiskers" or the octupus-man,
in your current position, you're not goin many places, so face it, jus quit rappin and put in diary yur "I made ya",
go trade pokemon cards wit lil kids, an if you're feelin horny, show em yur dick, they'll play wit it because yur girl never did,
so shit, go shoot up a library, and if you didn't get caught for rapin the kid, you're definately goin dis time bitch,
you feel right at home, rapist-homosexuals and psychotic people, which kick yo ass for lookin like a creep yo,
so nighty night and sleep tight, hold on ta your bed covers real hard, cuz in the mornin ull be needin all dat muscularity in yur fore-arm.

yeah, authentic did real well, and he gets my vote for his good flow and vocab....d-meth, you got a great vocab, but practice your flow more...aight, i voted for yall, now return the favor please....dope_emcee vs. enygma...we need a tie breaker...

authentic came harder
meth u had alot of played out lines
both were good yall could work on vocab and personals a lil though

came with it
 

authentic came with it....nice flow...i mean that little mistake line murded d-meth...mad props to authentic

my vote goes 2 AUTHENTIC
cuz his struture work wit his
flow both of u need 2 work on it
dough
v/AUTHENTIC
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Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Auth. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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