dirtboy69 vs. kingz
 

verses due by friday night
10 to 16 bars

here just something quick, couldn't really get into writing today:

i've gotten agervated that it has to be restated/
a loss for you is slated don't whine just take it/
if you take a fit your lyrical strength ain't shit/
wins? you never get if you've got one it must be conterfit/
your punches are funny but far from in a good way/
like your piggy backing with a skeleton everyday/
your votes are always gotten riding the bone/
concentrating,thinking do you stand all alone?/
kingz the worst on the site that's his zone/
take this king'z power away with my spittin/
kingz powerless like the royal family in britain/

*Kingz gets up onto the stage*

yo u a fool for callin me out dirtboy69.....
forget a '69' you prefer anal acts - n waste all ya time on a gay hot-line
yo dont worry bout that secret ya told me son - my lips are sealed
but ya aint gangsta you a 'pussy' jus like 'Garfield'
but this 'cat' aint got 'whiskers' - cos he aint hit puberty
you a bit 'slow' - still thinkin bout wot you gon' do-to-me
'dirt'boy69 - i think u need to 'clean' up ya-act-homie
u a retard- we dont want ya breeding - so at birth they gave u a vasectomy
ya 'came' too soft - ya gunna 'fall' like 'Niagra'
only way ya can 'come' hard is if ya were on 'viagra'
so go home dirt’boy’ and come back when u a ‘man’
this shit aint over- its only jus began………….

kingz that was hot, good punches. Dirtboy, go back to the sand pit

upping for votes...................................

yo i think kingz won this battle everything of his was good
vote for kingz

i thought you were suppose to explain votes? anyway uppin

dirtboy had one punch in his whole rap. kingz was funny with consistant punches. Dirtboy had a good flow but this ain't a record it's a battle. Vote kingz. P.s dirtboy wanna battle? i dunno where you got those 11 wins from.

Both Verses Were Cool, But I Got To Give It To Sac King. He Had Better Rhymes And Word Play. You Get A 5 Of 10 Homie. Keep It Up Fellas. One.

..............supervillain The Kingpin

I Mean Kingz, Not Sac King. My Bad, Im Doing Like 10 Things At Once. Feel Me?

S.v.

69 HAD QUITE A NICE STYLE THE FLOW WAS GOOD AS HE USED ALOT OF SIMILIES
BUT HIS PUNCHES AND METAS WERE WEAK AND NOT VERY CLEVER

KINGS HAD A NICE FLOW ALSO AND HIS PUNCHES WERE FUNNY BUT IN A GOOD WAY
HE WAS A LOT MORE CREATIVE AND HAD A BETTER VOCAB

VOTE-KINGS

VOTE HONESTLY AND LEAVE UR BATTLE LINKS
vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219

KINGS HAD A NICE FLOW ALSO AND HIS PUNCHES WERE FUNNY BUT IN A GOOD WAY
HE WAS A LOT MORE CREATIVE AND HAD A BETTER VOCAB

VOTE-KINGS

VOTE HONESTLY AND LEAVE UR BATTLE LINKS
vs rec-dfor you is slated don't whine just take it/
if you take a fit your lyrical strength ain't shit/
wins? you never get if you've got one it must be conterfit/
your punches are funny but far from in a good way/
like your piggy backing with a skeleton everyday/
your votes are always gotten riding the bone/
concentrating,thinking do you stand all alone?/
kingz the worst on the site that's his zone/
take this king'z power away with my spittin/
kingz powerless like the royal family in britain/

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219[/QUOTE]

yo u sed u voted for me but ya voted for da wrong person?

uppin.............................................

uppin for vote come on now don't sleep on this ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!