D-Meth ``[vs]`` SnypeR
 

usaul rules........
**Battle reposted**

D-METH'S VERSE

ima rip dis bitches adam's apple out, throw it ta ma dogs an see if they like the juice,
cuz bitches with played-out names like "snyper" belong in church, hittin them high notes,
singin in "a major", wit feminious voices, never heard of ya before but i can see yur drawn by gay-forces,
your fuckin crews name is "tray six", i gotta catch-phrase for u, "We rape sheep"
only play ull ever get~ tryin ta get props on a message board, wit fake metaphors u stole from em's vocal chords,
but keep elevatin, ure only undefeated because u battled hoes, steppin over the toes of "amatuers"
further more, i'll levatate you ass, like a ghost-hosue wit "hot" furniture,
burnin ya wit 3rd degrees, tat type ish leaves scarz, all ya over hands and jaw,
ull be cryin like a bitch who got stepped on, an all bones in his body crushed,
u gotta be a leprachaun, ta magically wish ya ass a body mesh, fresh of the press,
snyper got raped and murdered, like a 13 year old girl who got taped and jiz-blurred,
choked til she cudnt scream for "toon" world, cuz dats the only place "she"(Snyper) likes getting "fooled" in.

SNYPERS VERSE

Fight-me-through and just surrender...it's what you'll likely-do/
My punches get lighted-too and "burn this asshole" like spicy-food/
D-Meth? What is this? Why do you talk so gay?/
You be a Popey "hurricane" and still not "blow-me-away"/

You rap?-no...you wack-though...I'll rip ya face with a back-hoe/
You got mad when You couldn't use "terror squads" impersonating fat-joe/
Strain-to-ponder but no matter what you're still a labeled-goner/
No need to state-it-longer...Meth... could be brides best friend...but never "made-of-honor"/

Hey-I'm-stronger,.... so why don't you just stick to holes-in-asses/
Ya fake no name crew gets swallowed-in-masses,/
you couldn't make me "look bad" if ya stole-my-glasses/
You're not-gonna-win so cease trying cuz I'm not gonna say stop-it-again/
You remind me of a good hand of poker...you gettin "dropped-for-the-win"/

Grabbed my glock and cocked-it-again till it peels-at-domes/
I beat you till you were in "critical condition" so you could "feel-at-home"/
The "arrow points" to this developed-hater, so it easy to "TELL-I'M-GREATER"/*1*
You won't want to show-in-town...Meth "goin-down" like elevators/
I smell-a-traitor...wasn't EC only down-with-skill?/

You shoot blanks and end up like "rich alchoholics"...still got a round-to-fill/
I found-a-kill so why not give Meth competition alleviation/
I hold depreciation cus ya punches are "MT" like mountain abbreviations/*2*
You're not-blazin..you better hope I'm off on my drop-placement/
But this mexican better guess-again...like chinese sex...this was all "cock-asian"/*3*

I'm sick-in-this and my words bring all terrific-hits/
D-Meth is-a-bitch...the closest he'll get to "mics" is his birth certificate/*4*
I'm limit-less with sentences...and I'm gettin sick of killz gay-snarl/
So I'll just finish em now...and you "never saw me cummin" like sex with Ray-Charles/*5*

..:::Expiations:::..
*1* - You know in math...equal or lesser signs....the arrow points to the lesser one...so it was easy to see I'm greater.....

*2* - The abbreviation for Mountain is "mt." mt=empty

*3* - cock-asian + caucasian (white people)
*4* - If his name was Mike it would be on his birth certificate

*5* - Ray Charles is blind...never saw me cummin...get it

May the voting began..................................

^^^^^^^LMAO
FLOW-i think shyper had a betta flow meth was kinda shaky shpyer had his all laid out
PUNCHES-shpyer punches was funny So I'll just finish em now...and you "never saw me cummin" like sex with Ray-Charles/*5* dats was good
PERSONALS-n/a
VOCAB-shyper had a good vocab meth u should use bigger words it makes yo flow sound itteligent
ORIGNALITY-Both of yall shit was original

v/shyper

yo my vote SnypeR.....heres y..........


SnypeR: yo man you took it to max man...jsut about every linr had coo punches and metas...........i like that spicy foods one too that shit was hot man..........its kinda hard to say what you should work on more...all i gotta sayis keep it up good shit man...

D-METH: yo man i dont why but ur shit didnt really flow together to me mayb is the way you wrote it but i dont know.....i mean it was coo n all but oviously not enough to be snyper.......work on ur structure too man.....also mayb every1 else knows but whats jiz-blurred or jizblurred.....but i can c you have potential man so keep it up...

my vote = SnypeR

uppin............................................. ......

breakdown for d-meth's verse:

flow: solid through the whole verse nothing really mad about it 6/10

volcab: could of been stronger but it's atleast balanced through the whole verse 6/10

punches: there was a couple of non direct really general ones thrown nothing too personal, nothing that i thought really hurt snyper best line was probably, "ima rip dis bitches adam's apple out, throw it ta ma dogs an see if they like the juice," 5/10

overall:17/30 good verse but i don't think good enough to win here though

breakdown for snyper's verse:

flow:i don't think it was quite as good as meth's the long bars didn't really contain anything like multis to tighten it up which hurt it 5/10

volcab: in spots it was good like the lines,"You shoot blanks and end up like "rich alchoholics"...still got a round-to-fill/ I found-a-kill so why not give Meth competition alleviation/ I hold depreciation cus ya punches are "MT" like mountain abbreviations/*2* You're not-blazin..you better hope I'm off on my drop-placement/
But this mexican better guess-again...like chinese sex...this was all "cock-asian"/*3*" but outside of that it was average 6/10

punches: way better here then in meth's verse fav lines were quoted above already 8/10

overall: 19/30 good verse

vote-- close battle but i gotta give it to snyper just more and better punches

nice breakdown.................thanx................... ....

Meth............your verse was one of the better ones I saw on the site.............



^^^^ewww....kinda gruesome...........5.5/10

Snyper.........your verese was pretty tight.............



^^^^that line was mad crazy................8/10

there's not to much advice I can give either of ya'll.....cause ya'll both straight...........

both wuz good but snyper had better puches structer personal my vote goes to snyper