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Furoshis vs. DisasterMaster
yo man u know rules
10-12 lines no hate votes or 1 line votin no d/r first to 5 votes win good luck.................... |
delete this please messed up.....................................
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ok here we go
some poeple from tray six, they try to diss after I serve this sucka, then you'll up to this i'm gona pass u and then you'll miss me cuz im alot of things that you'll never be i'll cook you in three lines like i work at micky D u cant be reppin sac cuz u just tredin water in the heat when its a one hundred and ten you said lets battle cuz you might think im punk im at my best like lil jhon, im getin crunk i can beat u ten thousand times, even when im drunk even though im white i can still spit the funk |
neva mind dont delete this........................k im bout to go right now...........
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yo ill brb back gotta post later pops gotta use comp but i really will have it
fa sho dont think im goona go n rite now alright |
yo i keep my mac clean to blast fiens that try to act mean//
my shits keen to good to go unseen n dont think drunk is when your off caffeine// ill split your spleen wit flows to clean then let every1 watch like a tv screen// but now its time to take my rhymes to the next line// so you betta resign petition me then stand in the picket line// cuz ill leave you in the state of mind wishin that b4 this battle youd decline// n wit my nine penetratin your spine climbin up like a vine makin you mine// me a sucka? i think you need to redefine..dont wanna get ur blood spilled like red wine// n you couldnt serve me if i was a dinner plate u lost is what i accusate// cuz i got verbs that conjugate ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate// yo dis is weak but enough to win i think.............. |
yo man sorry it took so long too but oh well it is what it is........................
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oops second line is............. n dont think drunk is when ur on caffeine//
my bad...................... |
also last line is .....................
cuz i got verbs that conjugate u herbs so ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate// once again sorry for all these mix ups just read it over right now and noticed da mistakes i made.............. |
-------------------dude upin for votes------------
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uppin needs some votes .........................................
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i'on kno y niggaz ain't votin
yo its ez disastermaster's structure i did not like..it didn't flo..build ya meta furoshis..u wurr ferocious..u lit it up wit tha structure and punch linez VOTE:FUROSHIS |
this was really close
dis ok flow good personals u need to work on vocab fur good flow ok punches some were played a lil u need to work on personals and voc vote dis barely cause he actually had a personal |
yo yall we need some votes on dis..................................
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uppin for some votes..........les get this thang over wit...............
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