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accomplishment VS $$UPREME
10-30 Lines
Go First Let The Best Man Win |
yeah your cool rock fish
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[Ayo, pictureperfect, This was my first battle in this forum.......Check some shit out before you give a pity vote. Just look at your breakdown........
originality-enygma stucture-enygma other cats aint very good flow-enygma punches-accomplishment havin fags ride your dick who cant even vote-enygma I count one catagory that you gave to Accomplishment...........how the fuck does that give him a win? Can I please get some honest, thought out votes. If you think I got beat, just explain how I lost and don't give a pity vote......I can |
My Bad I Post On Wrong Thread
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spit somptin you homosexual
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You Aint Bout Shit I'll Lay Yo Ass Out On A Stretcher//
Leaving Yo Body Wit Mo Spots Then A Leopard// Not To Mention Your Lyrics Are Soft// Ill Crush You Have You Leaking Jam Like I Was Squeezing A Pop Tart// Fucking Wit Me Have You Seeing Visions// Niggaz Is All Up Yo Ass Like U Living In Prison// U Just Another Mc Bitch// With White Stuff On Your Lip// Everybody Would Think U Was Sucking Some Dick// Dont Even Reply I Already Won// Wit So Much Heat You Would Think My Mouth Was Gun// When You See Talents I Advise You To Run// You Aint Even Strong Enough To Cock A Semi-// Knife Game Will Have Your Hands Down On The Ground Like If You Were Reaching For A Penny// |
dont be makin life threatining decisions by callen me out...
the ask me for fo-givness as i'm chalkin you out... I was just arrrested cuz my rhymes found to be weapons of mass destruction... cuz i'm lyrically spitten at you verses of mass corruption... yo rhymes leave you and vanish without a trace... but i'm takin you outa place and leave you chopped up in outerspace... talkin lik you supreme then i'm fucken higher powers... leavin ya crashed like planes into the two towers... yo shit so week i'll re-read it and make a correction... after realizing you couldnt fuck me up witha twenty foot irection... verses like viruses cause so much sickness and infection... but yo mama cant recognize you after a thorough inspection... scarface nottin you dont know shit about sellin blow... but i'ma blow you off dis planet like my driveway covered in snow... the world aint your cuz you amountin to nottin... except a dickridin bitch whose rhymes are always frontin.... so i'll leave you with this a finisher it wont be required... cuz yo ass got rolled like some fireston tires chuch |
yo supreme won..i liked both punchlines but sumpreme impressed me more with the structure...
VOTE:$$umpreme |
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I Need Votes Help A Nigga Out |
uppin for votes dirta 1 30
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week battle...both came wid no flow or structure....accomplishment had beter punches....other cat was kinda basic.....both had no mulitups or any complex to the verse....both need a lot of work.....
v/acomplisment coz he had some ok punches |
upppin fo votes my dirta ..
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we need more votes for this one
everybody needs to vote!! |
uppin fo votes ond is battle right hurr yo
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upppin need some real votes on dis one right hurr
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