YoungStar* vs. DisasterMaster
 

10-20 lines
first to five votes
you spit first
ill spit 30 min after you

ma flo iz ill
have all tha stupid niggaz askin iz that chic fa real
i shoot ya in ya grill
ma spit spread like a chemical spill
it jus keep gittin higher like ya fone bill
so wut' tha deal
iz ya ass alrite
i have ya ass all lit up like a damn LITE-BRITE
ya spit so weak thought we wuz havin a pillow fite
You a parasite..ur tha lowest
i'm out..i won..and i alreadi kno it

you think you won and i havent even spit
i but the fly shit and then you'll submit
are u born off that bannana cuz u wanta split
im ready to win this, i might make this a little fast
but ur rhymes dont last
you like the thrift store and im ecko, u'll always be surpassed
this battle will be your last, because your out of bussiness
i get payed more that a crooked witness
try to hala at me with some sucka shit
do some research and see who u messin with
i with punches that will make you hide under a sheld
like a boxer i have more ko's that evander holyfeild
so if you see me on the street than u beter yield
with 667 charaters you have been over killed

in line two is suppost to be "but I spit the fly shit"

so wutup do i spit again if i wanna or do we wait fo votes

you guys need to wait for votes................................

yo tray-six..furoshis..how u thank i did..i wanna b wit TRAY-SIX

i like that flow that was heat
but what i want to know is are you a dude or a chick
holla back

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Youngstar, u only had one punch right at the end, that wont help much,
u need to focus, on punching the opponent, u got the flow, now combine them

Disaster Master, lots of punches, i dig the flow, well..........not that u needed punches
u got this vote

Vote: DisasterMaster

Well Youngstar*, You had crappy stucture, and you had really short lines... Work on that. You really had no punches, because you had to short of lines. No multies personals.

Disaster came with the punches. He really had nothing else. But it took the battle considering Young only had one good punch.

I really dont have that much to type except both ya'll need to work on bar length, Young work on structure and length.. If i had to pick a flow, I would pick Disasters. Neither ya'll came hard at all..

V/ DIsaster

I'm giving this one to Disaster Master, like above YoungStarr, you need more punches, metts, structure, everything props to you thought the one punch you had was a good one i have ya ass all lit up like a damn LITE-BRITE
ya spit so weak thought we wuz havin a pillow fite
But obviously this was not enought to overcome. Anyways keep elevating.

Da Vinci,

P.S
I gotta battle open that needs some vote, could ya guys check it out.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116046

~~~~~~~~~~~upin for some of them there votes~~~~~~~~~~