YoungStar* \\s// Lyricalchick
 

10-15 line
5 votes win 3-0 ko
house rules
in by 12:00 tonite

Lyricalchick bouts to slaughter dis bitch//
My rhymes can come out whack in dey still a diss ya//
My rhymes are so tight u gotta put em bak in rewind//
U tried out fo tray-six dey neva got bak to u so i guess dats a DECLINE//
U a rookie u aint got dis lyrical talent//
U can neva beat me dis aint even a challenge//
Wen u don readin dis i have u lookin like prince//
Thinkin u can win bitch gett a fukin grip//
My rhymes like a disease dey'll come in kill ya//
Youngstar wat da fuk dats a wanna be name//
U might as well admitt dat yo rhymes dey lame//
Im done wit dis bitch she even kno dat she loss//
Gon spit yo whack shit before u get yo loss//

this iz me
 

yo this chic wanna battle
when i beat ya ass up don't go and tattle
yo spin ma cadi on a dyme
yeah i kno i spit icy ass lynez
ma shit wouldn't even have ta rhyme
i cud spit ma shit and put in on a sign
it will take you 4eva to beat me
u can take till 12 midnite and u still won't defeat me
yo i spit so i can git in TRAY-SIX
ma lyrix got u hi thinkin u on a fix
yeah i like to git in tha mix
spit till tha day i die
yo i got all tha heavi shit so i can't even fli
BYE AND BYE
:shoot: :shoot: :)

vote on dis fo us

Well lyrical chick, Great job wit the rymin skills.
Young star you got my vote cuz i felt the coldness of your spits n some of ur punchlines where funny.

Vote=YoungStar

lyrical chick wut does 3-0 ko mean
lol..first tymer

yo this chic wanna battle
when i beat ya ass up don't go and tattle
yo spin ma cadi on a dyme
yeah i kno i spit icy ass lynez
ma shit wouldn't even have ta rhyme
i cud spit ma shit and put in on a sign
it will take you 4eva to beat me
u can take till 12 midnite and u still won't defeat me
yo i spit so i can git in TRAY-SIX
ma lyrix got u hi thinkin u on a fix
yeah i like to git in tha mix
spit till tha day i die
yo i got all tha heavi shit so i can't even fli
BYE AND BYE

nvm i kno wut 3-0 KO meanz...i ihad to think bout it fo a min

yo youngstar got this one becuz she had some pretty coo lil linez...n lyrical the only thing that killed it for you is that same word rhyme thing that you did at the end....
but you girls both did well i gotta give it to ya..........
also girls work on your vocab and metas alil more but keep it up.............

my vote=young star

so i won rite?
How does that show up
good battle lyrical chick

Yo Someone Tell Me How Tha Public Kno I Don Won 1 Battle???!!!!!!

she ko your ass damn she murk u specially about the trey-six

lyrical better vocab better structure better punches good personal work on vocab though
young ok puinches u need to work on vocab structure personals and punches
lyrical won tis hands down i think young got some dr

dis is a fukin rip how da fuk yall vote fo young dat shit was garbage man she got ppl to vote fo her or sumin omg

yea i gotta go wit lyrical on dat it was garbage i think lyrical had betta punches specailly wen she said ''My rhymes are so tight u gotta put em bak in rewind//
U tried out fo tray-six dey neva got bak to u so i guess dats a DECLINE//"
dat was a killa line young u need to elevate