youngstar* vs $$upreme
 

10 line minimum
i'll spit first

iight..i accept that..first to 5 votez
and spit in by 10

u sed u spit first..so go...git ya spit on.........

I Ruin Young Mc's Rap Career's//
Cuz The Venom That I Spit Is Way Severe//
Why U So Down U Look Under The Weather//
Crack A Smile My Rims Spin Like Plane Prepellars//
If A Nigga Or A Bitch Wanna Battle Me It's All The Same//
I Just Kick Some New Shit And Spit Some Game//
C With A Gun In My Hand I Can't Fail//
I Got Guns And Ammo And There All For Sale//
Smoking Rapper's Be My Favorite Habit//
My Style Is The Shit It Aint For Sale But Mc's Always Wanna Have It//
I Spit The Shit That Aint For Polishing Shoes//
But For Putting These Niggaz Lyrics In Coffins And Thats Just What I Gotta Do//

yeah i figured u cud spit shit
but u gon fuck around and git ya ass split
yeah got u so confused u spittin and wanna quit
i wear u out like u wuz a baseball mit
Pop ur bubble like u wuz a nasty zit
erybodi want me but to no one i will commit
i had to git a license so ma spit cud be legit
ya ass so whack they label u a misfit
i wanna spit so that ur ass i can omit
ma lyrix so nastyl they can barely permit
ma spit so sharp had to git a first aid kit
spit so harsh it got u throwin a fit
u got lost in ma linez like u in a bottomless pit

YO YA"LL VOTE 4 US 5 votes win...3-0KO
HOLLA BAK

breakdown for youngstar:

flow:a good flow but really simple 6/10

punches:nothing really great here best punch was, "u got lost in ma linez like u in a bottomless pit" aside from that mah? 4/10

volcab: nothing really, just basic small worded rhymes got the job done but nothing great 3/10

overall: 13/30 really lack luster nothing special

breakdown for supreme:

punches:nothing really i mean it not trying to diss but i don't see a single punch just some open disses i can't even pick a fav line there just isn't one 2/10

volcab: really low on this too better then your oppenent but nothing great 6/10

flow: good flow kinda basic but alright 6/10

overall:14/30

vote-- my vote goes for supreme he was the lesser of two bads

we only got 1 vote in 2 days
uppin for some more votes

We Need More Votes For This One

Damn We Need Some Honest Votes
Holla Back

aight imma have to give this one to surpreme...but this was truly a weak battle.

supreme: you was hella sorry but i no you can do betta..punches not really that good..meta4s not really any...vocab, NONE..structure was good..all in all5/10

star: i no for a fact that you could do betta...mayb you just need a lil mo practice..but the only line i was fillen was the bottumless pit one...to me it sounded like you was repeatin the same thing..punches not to good...vocab not to good...
next time you need to come wit your best even if his shit was weak..all in all 4/10

UPPIN FOR VOTEZ YO YO YO YO...up up up..thanx for honest votes

Uppin 4 Votes

My Shit Was Weak But I Still Had More

((((JaCKOfAllTRaDeS))))

Supreme came through with some koo shit that got too the point and some good punches in but youngstarr no effense but your shit kinda bored me but its all good just keep battling ang hit hard every line dont focus too much on ryming but more of feeling hurting IM OUT!!!!!

My vote goes too $$upreme

Ruin Young Mc's Rap Career's//
Cuz The Venom That I Spit Is Way Severe//
Why U So Down U Look Under The Weather//
Crack A Smile My Rims Spin Like Plane Prepellars//
If A Nigga Or A Bitch Wanna Battle Me It's All The Same//
I Just Kick Some New Shit And Spit Some Game//
C With A Gun In My Hand I Can't Fail//
I Got Guns And Ammo And There All For Sale//
Smoking Rapper's Be My Favorite Habit//
My Style Is The Shit It Aint For Sale But Mc's Always Wanna Have It//
I Spit The Shit That Aint For Polishing Shoes//
But For Putting These Niggaz Lyrics In Coffins And Thats Just What I Gotta Do//

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

Plain and simple...........Young was pretty wack. You need to step up your rhymes and think about some shit before you write it. Don't just write words that rhyme.......make people say "Ohh Shit!"

$$upreme was a little weak too but his punches were a little bit better. You can still use some work on your shit, though.

Vote-$$upreme