YoungStar* vs SuperVillain
 

10 line minimum
5 to win and 3-0 KO
house rulez
u spit first
agreed????

Im Checking In. Lets Do This Shit. Im Typing My Verse Now. One.

S.v. The Kingpin

Dead Flowers............
 

THE FULL MOONS OUT, SO ITS TIME TO SHOW THESE SHEEP WHO THE BIG BAD WOLF IS...........LETS GET 'EM................



DONT MAKE ME RAISE MY FISTS IN ANGER,
ITS INSTANT DANGER FOR INNOCENT STRANGERS
SO PUCKER YOUR LIPS BITCH,
FOR A FRENCH KISS WITH DANGER,
WRISTS SLIT BY RAZORS,
CLICKS HIT WITH SPRAYERS,
CHICK, SPREAD YA LEGS UP,
THIS DICKS ABOUT TO RAID GUTS...
IM A BAD MAMMA JAMMA,
QUICK TO SLAP YOUR GRAN'MA,
THEN LEAVE NUT-STAINS ON HER PAJAMAS
LIKE MONICA LEWINSKI HAD 'EM...
YOUR ONLY BATTLING ME 'CUZ YOU FIEND NUTS,
ME FUCKED, THEN LEFT YOU STUCK
LIKE TREE STUMPS BY "DAWSONS CREEK" HUN,
PLEASE DONT HATE BOO,
JUST 'CUZ I USED TO DATE YOU
AND MAY HAVE GROOVED A FEW TIMES
WITH YOUR SISTER "THE BABE" THE OTHER DAY BOO...
YOUNGSTAR, COME HARD OR RUN FAR,
'CUZ MY TONGUE SPARK LIKE GUN PARTS
AND HUNTS HEARTS OF DUMB TARDS
WITH PLUMP ARSE AND CUNT PARTS,
IF YOUR DONE MA, THEN HUM...
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" :hump:


..........SUPERVILLAIN OF THE CRHYME SINDICATE

Damn.......i Know You Didnt Peep My Verse Then Log Off On Me. I Thought You've Been Waiting To Go. I Posted My Shit In Like 20 Some Odd Minutes. I Hope You Dont Cheat Cutty. I'll Have Faith In You Until I See Otherwise. Respond Back Tonight. I Look Forward To Seeing Your Verse. One.

..............supervillain The Tyrant

yo u look like a loon
kno ima shine like tha sun in June
ya spit iight it jus needs to b fine tuned
i pick one rhyme and stick wit it and crune
i'll leave u in tha wilderness like ma name wuz Daniel Boone
i kno ima hafta leave this thread soon
i pack enuff heat to fill a hot air balloon
ma spit have u on cloud nine like u on ur honeymoon
so basiccaly i say i can spit
i have enuff vocab to take a teacher and outwit
ma rymez in time will go down in history
most niggaz can't find me out im jus like a mystory
yo i'm basiccaly spitin to git in a cru
have all tha niggaz trynna holla like YODALAYHAYWHO
afta that line i spit no mo..niggaz i'm thru

Uppin' For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good Job Youngstar. Lets Try To Get These Votes In. Ya Feel Me?

............s.v. Dangerous

word up..ya'll git to voting ya heard...me and SV spit hard and we need some muthafuckinnn votes ya heard

close
villan ok punches u need to work on structure creativety vocab and personals
yong good punches creative funny need to work on vocab and personals and structure
vote young

opener: both average but i think supervilian
finsher: supervilian
metas: young star
flow: close - but supervilian
personals:tie - both lacking
punches: young star

close but im'a give this to supervilian

honest votes on these plz:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116302
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116230

Kingz u wanna do a unofficial battle
u kno
PM me
tell me if u wit a crew

Uppin' For Some Fair Votes People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lets Do This.

S.v. Dangerous

VOTES MA NIGGAZ...we trynna close this battle
VOTE VOTE FOR ANY BATTLES BY YOUNGSTAR* OR SUPERVILLAIN

super: i think u over did it, and actually overdone it
ur rhymes strange, not very potent, cant give it
and i give u 3/10

Young star, i dig the flow, not much punches, u NEED TO AIM PUNCHES AT OPPONENT
NOT YA TEACHER, u have my vote, but shape up
5/10

Vote: Youngstar

SV, I liked your stuff but it kinda wandered off track, and the CAPS threw me off. It makes it seems as if you were YELLING it and decreased its potency. It seemed like you were going more for multies than punches/personals.

i have enuff vocab to take a teacher and outwit
ma rymez in time will go down in history
^^^ Very nice and clever
yo i'm basiccaly spitin to git in a cru
have all tha niggaz trynna holla like YODALAYHAYWHO
^^^ Thruthful etc.

However I preferred Yougstars' this time, nice everything really although you went off track a little too.

But overall very close, good work guys and girls. Keep it coming.

Iight... Heres how it goes... SV your verse was iight...lose the caps. You had some alright punches, but man, mammajamma is like a Will Smith word... DON'T USE IT. But all you pretty much rapped about was fuckin her family. I didnt see any mentionable metas from you, or personals, or multies, or anything else.

YoungStar*, You had an OK verse. Your punches made me a chuckle a little, and damn, someone spelled out Yodalayhehoo, thats funny shit... You had some better punches and metas in here.

None of ya'll came with personals or multies, which dissapoints me, but it doesnt matter, right? Well it was an ALRIGHT battle.

V/ YoungStar*