Lyrical MC vs Carsonjetx2
 

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no d/r
no feedin
no bitin'
i spit frist

CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.

dis is carsonjsetxs verse:

Lyrical MC.......

Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....

^^^dats carson Jets verse^^^


votes please??

shit...sorry peeps..dat was ment to go on front lines but a admin moved it on to ere ^^^^

i liked both verses both of yall agve it yall all but carson all u did was talk about his record really i want feelin dat so my vote 2 lyrical mc

i have to give this one to mc.

mc just was all around betta...you had harder punches and betta vocab..this was not one of oyur betta battles..you use will smith in a lot of yur battles to..but you won this 1...next time come wit betta meta4s and punches..good vocab tho..7/10

jet..you was alrite but not good enuf.you sho potential...pretty good for a newb...but youllost me in the beginin with that weak banner shit but the rest was alrite...but you just need to come wit betta punches and alot of betta vocab..5/10

vote=mc

yo uppin

yo..uppin

lyrical takes this one his flow was tight and so were his punches and the fact thag carson couldnt even show what the hell so return da favor hit up my battles

uppin

I give this to lyrical mc his was better organized

he had better rhymes

and better punches

my vote=lyrical

yo please vote in my battle mike12 vs gambino

thanks dog

uppin

uppin for da last time hopfuly :D :

aiight ppl..ima break it down

carsonjet ..you had a good flow and your structure was there. But your punches and personals didnt hit hrd enough for me and as punches and personals win battles you needed to improve opn them in your next battle

lyrical...you had an aiight flow and your structure was ok as well. You came harder with your punches and personals cos i fink dat u deserve my vote.

keep it up both of you..v/lyrical