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My intro
yo check it,
I spit a liquid that they would'nt know would exist/ rhymes so dope they got injected in the siringe/ I just open my mouth ya'll start to flinch/ my dope culture is one of a kind/ i'm so deadly, i'm lyrically assasinating my own mind/ my skill can only be seen by the man who's blind/ yo body is being traced by the dotted line, play connect the dots, see what it comes up to/ whats crazy is of u theres two, one lookin down and one lookin up at u/ look a little to the left theres the rest of your crew, layin flat/ thats what happens when I take out the gap/ give a hard stare you gonna get part of that/ play in wooden chess and i'll shout my own name out/ spit so much flame i'm surprised my whole grill ain't flamed out/ i'm too strong so I take my own pain out/ i'm so bright that I glow in the dark/ I make a flamethrower look like if it throws sparks/ I got my dogs around my weist, for any reason they bark/ I bust shoots in the dark/ i'm silently killin u by rippin your heart/ don't try to touch me cause i'm lyrically packed like carts. |
dis was doper thanda last shit you did. you should be online more often
i give ya madd props. much love, demolish |
dis was nice "I spit a liquid that they would'nt know would exist/
rhymes so dope they got injected in the siringe/" dat was a nice line wid a good meanin..but it didnt rhyme...godd vocab..but next time use mulitpus ...keep it up bro....6/10 |
Thanx dog,
any one else got feedback? |
can a dawg get some feedback
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yo I felt that dis was fire !!!!!!!
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