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Accomplishment vs. Unbornrookie
same shit as the other two i fucked up on damnit
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accomplishment? / the only thing you accomplished kid /
is a motherfuckin problem bitch / ya ant ass ran fast but i'm still on top of it / stompin it / like a dermotologist / poppin it / and there ain't no stoppin this / just like there ain't no point to me droppin this / when everyone knows you ain't accomplished shit / shit you can roll wit accomplices / 'n ya still gonna find out how dawk it gets / when my gun lunge 'n spawk regrets / |
Yo dis is da illest shit on da street right now
Clearly u unborn cuz this is a fuckin Still-BIRTH... Even years aftah dis battle you gonna fuckin Still-HURT... lyrically, i'm albert einstien rabbid and on acid... so you get blasted as i'm foamin at da mouth ur about to get fully body casted... Like tyson cuz i'm bitin ears durin dis rhyming... couldn't outa dis BOX if you was a pro at fuckin miming... This new boi is posin as my fuckin chew toy... spitya out and still beat da shit outa ya like Jr. Roy... rookie nottin you be da bomb at suckin some guys shit... you da typea bitch that write a book on suckin dick... sorry about da gay jokes, but wit all da jizz in ya throught you may choke... but dats it yo rhymes is way BROKE...and impossible to put together... possibility of beatin me FUCKIN NEVER... |
alright uppin dis shit get it over quick mane
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Yo accomplishment could've not spit and on. Unborn you fuckin suck. Yo shit was nice accomplishment you just need a style to set you apart from everyone else. this battle made it final. Your in Parental Advisory. Just keep elavating and you could go far.
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So now we wait?
Who knows how long this could take before its closed
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aight still upppin fo votes on dis shit.........................
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not to free post but you still gotta battle liquor of tears or you gonna have a loss
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa accomplishment wins
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Uppin fo votes befo i go crazy and start cuttin throughts...
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uppin still yo
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Rookie's stuff was not as weak as folk make it out to be. He focused way too much on the rhyme scheme, but at least he showed he can do that, and he squeezed one punchline out of it that got my attention: the "dermatologist / poppin it" thing.
That said, however, Accomplishment clearly took this one with an unrelenting rain of punches. Not all of 'em connected (the Tyson / Bitin' ears thing is beyond played-out), but there's no doubt he put down the superior battle verse. |
yeah yeah thanx man upppin fo votes dirta thirty hot
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Comon man lets get some fuckin votes hurry up dis shit
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accomplishment wins
his flow was better UnbornRookie was soft had a gay start and finish |
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