dagreatest V YoungStar*
 

everybody read as i murda anotha mothafucka/
on the mic this young fool goes by the name of youngstar/
but i can can switch my lyrics in to 16 inch blades/
that'll leave more then a scar/
thats anotha name added for the kill/
anotha wannabe MC dead cos of my skills/
this is where the big doggs play/
got lyrics to make you burn down to your ashes/
step up here dont forget to bring your casket/
cos i'ma spit acid/
on this fuking weak bastard/
lil homie/
go home and watch teletubbies/
cos this aint no fucking michael jackson movie/
but you asked us/
hope your body got room for bruises/
cos your gonna get plastered/
lil rookie you cant do shit/
you only specialise in sucking mans dick/
you cant stop thinking about a cock/
dont try to be an MC/
cos you'll fuking get robbed/
this aint no joke/
everytime you'll choke/
just like benzino/
you good as broke

uppin............................................. ..................................

yo bro i ain't approved this battle...but ima go fa it...say tha rulez...now b4 i spit

yo bro i'm gonna drop ma bomb and um jus fyi..crew votes r allowed bro...ma cru tell truth..if they don't then i won't count it....i kno if u honestly beat me...sorry it took so long..i jus got back from vacation

u got some habits that drive me crazy
like when u spit ma nigga u seem so lazy
like theirs some smoke in ur eyes&ur vision iz hazy
rhymes so weak,i'll kill u, u pushin up daisies
U can't seem to git it out
u kno wut i'm talkin about
i mean ur spit iz whack, ma spit nasty like grout
when i leav3 tha winna, don't go home and pout
i'm sure u tried
i sed dagreatest wuz good,sure i lied
ur spit so unknown niggaz wurr sure dagreatest died
but dagreatest neva doubted me
i wuda killed u if u did
i have u squirming&moving like
ur last name wuz squid
so this is IT ma fake ass nigga i guess its farewell
Ur a herb,can i borrow u?i'm outta drugz to sell

both of yall use too much filler in ur verses, be more creative
"lil homie/
go home and watch teletubbies/"
that cracked me up but nothing really special about ur verse

i mean ur spit iz whack, ma spit nasty like grout
when i leav3 tha winna, don't go home and pout
i'm sure u tried
i sed dagreatest wuz good,sure i lied
ur spit so unknown niggaz wurr sure dagreatest died

probably ur most solid linez right there ur verse was less conventional and thus u get my vote

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I'm givin this one to YoungStar*. Just overall better flow. I mean both flows could be better, but then again all flows could be better. You both could definitley step it up a notch or two for sure. But none the less a vote for YoungStar*.

UBR

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yo im the flows were ok punches were alright but one thing that stuck in my mine was dagreatest line i can switch my lyrics into 16 inch blades or something along those lines im not sure if you meant to do it but that line sounds familar and eminem said some shit like that on rap-game with d-12
"switch blade with a lil switch to switch blades
switch from a 6 to a 16 inch blade "
not sure if you bite on purpose but im going to have to go wit youngstar*
her flow was better than some of her others and you just seemed to try to hard wit your punches and that teletubbie line was wack
dagreatest 3/10
youngstar* 4/10

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

advcatous diablio - hell wastes no fury

I Go 4 Star.............................................. ..

LOL dagreatest U SUCK. Youngstar u had some hot lines but i know u can do better. listen to a mobb deep beat. most likely quiet storm or one to that caliber to give you inspiration. sometimes works for me... i really liked the last line youngstar. you killed him with that one :thumbup: dagreatest just needs to retire...............................im just bein real.............................................. ....

lol much love..UPPINNNININIINININI,...................

yung one tkes this one by a lil bit it was like

2/10 da.worst..i mean greatast
3/10 and start but keep elevatin

flow young
vocab young both need work
punches young dg was corny
personals
tie
vote obviously ys