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MosDeff 03-17-04 02:34 AM

HighSchool Drama [Freestyle]
 
i was in gym class and some punk called-at-me//
didnt get my attention so he threw a ball-at-me//
i turned around and saw-him-gigglin//
called-him-dipshit//
told him the difference from his girl friend and my dog-is-lipstick//
i said his fathers fat and also called his mother-dumb//
so he picked up a fuckin ball and threw another-one//
i ducked,told him he sucked,and he picked up a fuckin-rock//
"Nah im just kiddin man,damn cant we fuckin-talk"//
"i didnt mean you mothers-dumb,man i love-yer-mom"//
"you threw two balls at me please dont throw another-one"//
reached out for a hand shake and i smiled-evily//
shook his hand as he dropped the rock mild-N-peacfully//
i punched his face wit no warning,i shoulda-said-block//
put-him-in-a-head-lock and said "you should-held-tha-rock"//
i let him get a head start before i kicked-that-clown//
let him stand up before getting sticked-back-down//
then i saw the principle//
i acted invisible//
"He woulda hit me wit a rock if didnt hit-him-tho"//
she took me to the office//
"alright mr.Hot-shit,you must have fucking lost-it"//
i didnt fucking loose it,this shit is fucking-non-sence//
this is bull fuckin shit man im full-of-this-school//
dropped to the floor when i saw a cop pull-up-to-the-school//
there was only one cop when i crawled-to-the-door//
then i saw him radio some guys and call-for-some-more//
sneaked-to-the-parking-lot//
seen-a-parking-cop,parking his cop car in a empty parking-slot//
waited till he left then i seen he didnt lock-the-door//
thoguht-some-more before i wired and pedeld to the floor//
drop the car off in a alley when i should gave-it-back//
going to jail for years for driving like a maniac//
wondering how much time-it-takes//
before i get finely get caught...or am i finely-safe?//

SUPERVILLAIN 03-17-04 03:26 AM

ha ha ha!!! that shit was funny. the only advice i could give you is to expand your vocab. good shit though. p.m. me with more of your work. peep my verses in open mic, then tell me what you think. i look forward to hearing from you cutty. one.

......supervillain of the crhyme sindicate

!ceCold 03-17-04 06:04 AM

that is sum heavy shit mate.you realy got some talent there.maybe you could teach me sum of ur shit cus it realy flips my mind.

MosDeff 03-17-04 07:48 PM

thanx man...imma keep posting

DirtBoy69 03-17-04 07:52 PM

kidna funny in a very cynical way a couple of nice punches thrown in there to i liked that girlfreind, dog line. solid flow threw the whole peice the volcab could of been a little deeper but it's a 'freestyle' so i don't think it hurts nice piece

MosDeff 03-17-04 09:28 PM

Thanx

MosDeff 03-17-04 11:37 PM

tell me....hot or not


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