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HighSchool Drama [Freestyle]
i was in gym class and some punk called-at-me//
didnt get my attention so he threw a ball-at-me// i turned around and saw-him-gigglin// called-him-dipshit// told him the difference from his girl friend and my dog-is-lipstick// i said his fathers fat and also called his mother-dumb// so he picked up a fuckin ball and threw another-one// i ducked,told him he sucked,and he picked up a fuckin-rock// "Nah im just kiddin man,damn cant we fuckin-talk"// "i didnt mean you mothers-dumb,man i love-yer-mom"// "you threw two balls at me please dont throw another-one"// reached out for a hand shake and i smiled-evily// shook his hand as he dropped the rock mild-N-peacfully// i punched his face wit no warning,i shoulda-said-block// put-him-in-a-head-lock and said "you should-held-tha-rock"// i let him get a head start before i kicked-that-clown// let him stand up before getting sticked-back-down// then i saw the principle// i acted invisible// "He woulda hit me wit a rock if didnt hit-him-tho"// she took me to the office// "alright mr.Hot-shit,you must have fucking lost-it"// i didnt fucking loose it,this shit is fucking-non-sence// this is bull fuckin shit man im full-of-this-school// dropped to the floor when i saw a cop pull-up-to-the-school// there was only one cop when i crawled-to-the-door// then i saw him radio some guys and call-for-some-more// sneaked-to-the-parking-lot// seen-a-parking-cop,parking his cop car in a empty parking-slot// waited till he left then i seen he didnt lock-the-door// thoguht-some-more before i wired and pedeld to the floor// drop the car off in a alley when i should gave-it-back// going to jail for years for driving like a maniac// wondering how much time-it-takes// before i get finely get caught...or am i finely-safe?// |
ha ha ha!!! that shit was funny. the only advice i could give you is to expand your vocab. good shit though. p.m. me with more of your work. peep my verses in open mic, then tell me what you think. i look forward to hearing from you cutty. one.
......supervillain of the crhyme sindicate |
that is sum heavy shit mate.you realy got some talent there.maybe you could teach me sum of ur shit cus it realy flips my mind.
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thanx man...imma keep posting
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kidna funny in a very cynical way a couple of nice punches thrown in there to i liked that girlfreind, dog line. solid flow threw the whole peice the volcab could of been a little deeper but it's a 'freestyle' so i don't think it hurts nice piece
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Thanx
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tell me....hot or not
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