The Break Up [freestyle]
 

shut up you fuckin bitch,dont untie-your-hands//
your not greatful for the fucking shit i buy-you?-damn//
im not a fuckin physco,but then maybe-i-am//
drive you off a fuckin bridge like that crazy-guy-stan//
from the eminem-vid//
remember-that-bitch?//
aiight,temper temper,try ta calm-down//
try ta walk straight a straight line,try not ta fall-down//
back to the conversation,quit bitchin-N-screamin//
kickin-N-reamin the table aint gon get-you-to-freedom//
whyd-you-do,all of this when i buy-you-jewlz?//
and i support you wit a crib,and im-the-fool?//
our relationship is based like flippin-a-coin//
get what im sayin?come on bitch ya missin-tha-point//
im sayin that i love you but you only-want-cash//
youz a ho and a gold digga,i aint rollin-wit-that//
go a head talk shit while i suck-down-beer//
second thought,untie your self & get the fuck-outta-here//

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wanna battle?
 

yo you wann battle?

iight...set it up

nah you set it up im new to like this site n shit

that other free you did, was better then this. this still has an alright story and flow but i don't know it wasn't really funny so i depended on your lyrics to impress me more and it just came off average not bad but average.

yo dawg stick to your day time job and go slob on that knob dont try to compete wit me you cant as you can see soo stop tryin cuz when im done wit you you be cryin

crzywhtekid how bout you battle a real crazy white kid me

aight lets go i dont give a shit you aint crazy you prolly cant flow soo lets go

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